by beniboy
I liked the story but it really turned into a lesbian sexual fantasy. In fact it was mostly fantasy. Don't think it could be real. Like someone else said they talked too much. I don't talk that much during sex and have never found a man who was able to last that long.
The only real fault with this series is its brevity; it certainly had (and still has) great possibilities to be continued, should the author wish to do so. Five stars.