All Comments on 'Sister Helps Out'

A Very sweet, tender and caring story. And very well written.5🌟

Oh wow! Need more. I have always had a fantasy about having a sister like this. If I had a sister this way we would probably have been married secretly and share everything. I had to do with sister-in-law. I do not think it is the same even as good as it was before she passed of cancer. My wife, her sister, and I have not been the same since.

She's on her knees sucking some kids dick, and she flips out because she hears that her boyfriend is getting some too. Hilarious.

Good sister/brother incest story. A little long. Too much narrative, cut it back some. Maybe 3 & 1/2 to 4 full pages, not 5. The surprise ending was great. Sets up chp. 2 and possibly chp. 3. Do not make Paul exactly the same as Kyle; shorter penis less girth? Gwen takes it in stride, with Paul a little slower with more guidance, same results. Paige and Kyle watch? Chp. 3 Paige and Gwen trade?

Why did you stop writing? You are great!

really didn't like the deception

I most definitely didn't enjoy the deceit. That was kinda messed up in all honesty. The rest was hot and very sweet, I could tell she very much loves her brother and genuinely cares about him...but I wish she didn't manipulate him.

Loved this story. By chance do you have a book? Would love too get it.

The description of the siblings discovering each other sexually is very well done. Like other commenters I'm not fond of the manipulation.

As an aside. An observation that seems odd, to me anyhow: a gazillion of stories contain scenes with men fantasizing about a female they are attracted to. Very often they imagine the woman of interest being pleasured by other people. BTW I'm not talking about voyeur or cuck stories, but stuff like romances etcetera. Speaking for myself, I didn't often indulge in daydreams of this nature, but in case I did I envisioned myself in the male leading role. While growing up girls of course have been a favourite topic of conversations among boys. Never did I hear someone say: "Imagine how this hot thing is fucked by her current boyfriend or this or that guy." Nope, the saying was: "I wouldn't push her out of MY bed"- see? Let's just say I believe it's a minority of men who are aroused by thinking of the hot neighbour's pussy being plowed by her hubby or a faceless man. Most will cast the role of the one doing the virtual plowing with themselves.

On the other hand researchers found that it's a favourite women's fantasy to be taken by a faceless stranger, in public places for instance. My conclusion would be that a good deal of writers using these scenes are females, projecting their imagination onto (or into?) men. Whatever the case, I wish they'd cut it out. While it's not very disturbing when reading a hot, well written story for the first time, it's quite irritating during re-reading.

It seems most stories I have been reading during the past weeks include a section like the following for instance: a young man is secretely being in love with his mom. Unintendedly he becomes earwitness of mom's exclamations of passion and other sounds that result from an ongoing fuckfest with her latest boytoy. Our young man develops a stiffy and wanks it. Yuck! In his place I'd put on headphones or flee the crime scene.

The summers just starting and you have two stories. You won't leave us hanging( he wasn't quite hanging) like Gwen did with Kyle. I didn't have anyone knocking on my door. The girls might want to share each boy in the maturing of these two young men

Great story very hot

Captures feeling of great sex

Lol she doesn't want to share now, and has been clearly thinking about how to make their future work...... That's called love, not lust.... Let's get a chapter 2 of their future going