All Comments on 'Sister in Backseat Heat'

Hoping they continue this after the get home.

A stretch of credibility but sexy fun nevertheless.

Hot story, I enjoyed it but I wonder what happens next. If sis really liked his dick maybe she will want it often.

Too short.

Writing about fifty times already

Who the h**l is Sam?

"Marissa slipped her hand into her panties..." Neat trick, since she had already pushed them down around her ankles. then a few minutes later she pulled them back up again.

Short but sweet

Can we get more parts to this please so many things could happen from here awesome story

Need more of these two

I can't wait to read what the summer break will bring the two of them.

Awesome.

Hope you will add more chapters. Summer us a great place.

I'd love to see this story continue.

Great job with a familiar scenario. Thanks.

Tc

Not very original.

I am very disappointed that a author that claims to have been a editor and openly sounds like they want to review others writings. You have done the one thing that lends you NO Credit that's called "PLAGIARISM" Piss Poor

hope theres more to come

I tend to give new authors a break. Well written and easy to read. The story is a bit bland and has very little character development. I'll leave it at that.

Awesome... Well-written. Short and sweet.

Hey editor, you'll find similar works as we authors do. Don't let mom writers bother you. Keep writing what you like and publish often. Best regards, Rae.

"read" is not a color

Enjoyed this story--it was just the right length (not the only thing that was the right length). It would be fun if this did lead to a continuing liaison.

Write more please I loved it

I'd really like to see a continuation of this story. Please........

In the paragraph that starts with, "I don't want that on my hand!", David's name changes to Sam about halfway through. Otherwise, nice short story!

Hehe, didn't notice the Sam slip... That is the name I used in the last story.

Thanks for all the comments! I'm a big fan of the car sex formula, so I thought I'd try my hand at it for practice.

You should continue this story. Enjoyed it.

Pretty good story. I have no idea how the parents in the front couldn't hear them in the back, but it did help the story along. It is a story after all, and well written. There is a possibility of further chapters, but not necessary; it stands well as a one-off.

The minute I read title, I knew I have read this story, told in a similar fashion, and believe it was between a mother and her son

Great beginning to your Literotica collection! Keep it up.

You need to add chapters to this!

Not, bad. Good enough that I would read more from this story, hope you add anal to sisters kink list.

If you follow the mold of the mom/both parents knew they were fucking the whole time or catch them in the act and join in I hope you keep the main focus on the siblings. A foursome with mom or sis being dp'd is fine and sexy but prefer B/S pairings.

Goth sex life, reluctant at first, but wild and lust filled. Great beginning and with an editor, 5* comming

More chapters required. Good story. AAAA++++

Anal when they get home please

Would love a sequel

This could use another chapter and a longer set up for sex between the two

Good story, right to the point.. not a bunch of boring information. Thanks

The perfect balance of sex and narration on a short story! Well done it's like a welcome mouthful on a good restaurant and would be nice to have some sequels in the same spirit, short stories with public sex between the siblings in inconspicuous situations.

Great story... I agree with Mb0754, totally.

Lucky boy. Really enjoyed the story. Well written. Good dialogue. Loved it.

This was great. 😁

Nice, very nice.

Would love to see more Chapters on their getting together again & again , yes ?

YES !

What kind of panties was the sister wearing?

This is such terrible writing it makes twilight look like a masterpiece

Very weak story line taken from another LR post.

please continue

You say she discovered his cock on the ride home... surely she will want more? And to taste more of what was on her hand?

A little rushed at the end