All Comments on 'Sister-In-Law Affection Ch. 05'

One of the best I've read!

Although you are quite generous about describing Ashley, all we know about Kay is that her tits are bigger and her hair is longer (and perhaps her libido isn't as furious). It undercuts your protagonist's protestations of true love a bit, but overall, very nice work.

Sorry to see you fall into the taught/taut trap ... remember, spelling checkers are NOT your friend.

Best wishes,

Mole

I would enjoy reading another chapter or two but I also think that this has come to a good ending. Not quite enough actual sex to suit me because I am greedy but a great story. Thank you for writing.