All Comments on 'Sister-in-Law Katie'

Old people!! ::Shudder::

Well written. For those of you who are not there yet, if lucky, you will might find yourself old and continuing to have sex someday.

Very Good. Is there a good portion of truth in this story?

I am very sorry for first commentor, of "old".

Truth is you to will be OLD some day. Enjoy youth while you can, for it is there for but an instant.

Len

At his age he would be luckey to see it yet keep it up for hours

Contrary to some commentators' thoughts, us old folks do some pretty serious fucking too. If you don't want to go there, then you'd better hope your dick falls off before you get old. That's my wish for you.

I'm glad that he tongue fucked her asshole and sucked on her clit, while he was giving her pussy some loving, The dude knew how to pleasure his woman.

I wish that they would have been more comfortable with having a long term commitment to an affair, and continued with seeing each other frequently.

Thanks for the read.

I liked the sensitivity with which you wrote this story. It was so tender and considerate. But... There were several reasons why you need to find an editor. I'll list just a few of them. 1. When a relationship is non-sexual it is called Platonic (relating to Plato) not Plutonic (referring to Pluto); 2. the plural of sister-in-law is sisters-in-law; 3. after her shower, he could smell the soap she used on her pussy but he also got her feminine smell, not her famine smell; 4. when they were parting she said something like "on a count of me." What she actually should have said was "on account of me." These are silly mistakes that s speaker of English shouldn't be making. Get an editor. They are offered free of charge by Literotica. But the story was sweet, and you should keep writing. Rick

the love making in detail. Very very few writers do that.

and beautifully told.

A few minor misspellings as pointed out by ricksouza did nothing to spoil my enjoyment of it. It's one more 5 star effort from this writer.

One might hope that this would be the start of a continuing relationship but the ending seems appropriate and realistic.

And to the anonymous commentator who considers it "rubbish" let me assure you that "getting it up" is by no means a rarity for a 64 year old. You should live so long!

The little shits who think they'll never be old have a sad rude awakening coming to them if they're lucky enough to live so long.

I really liked this story. Thanks for another great read.

Warren

I lost interest at that point

Yeah thats right old man - dumbass how about you join her when she fucks off to hell both you deserve nothing less

in funny way I thought it was sweet (well written

Lucky so and so . Nice writing , excellent real talk while in the heat of the moment from 2 people that have feelings for each other , but only now taking 'it ' to next level.

Full marks * * * * *

It's already been a year. Who knows how much time she has left to feel the warmth and satisfaction you shared together. Offer to meet her again and set the date!

If you live long enough you will be an old person. As a male past 70 I can truthfully say that I still get just as aroused and hard as when I was young. I can control myself better. Also, with age and experience, one learns not to be so restrictive in what you think is sexy and beautiful. A lot of younger folks only look through a narrow lens. An intelligent woman, although maybe less physically beautiful to some men, can be very arousing. I see beautiful women of all ages, races, and sizes.

Well, it's over 5 years since it was written, so I'm feeling sad that something has happened. Now you never admitted to getting a second, third, or fourth go at her, but whether you did or not, you gave her all she would need if the last day were definitely upon her. Beautiful story, well written, but, yes but you should had someone proof it for you.

XYZ