All Comments on 'Sister on a Mission'

You had to end it with guys sucking each others cocks. GROSS

I think that was sooo fucking cool...and MUM found out her son was indeed a cocksucker...what a tremendous finish...thank you

needs a gay tag you asshat

So gross and a very poorly written story... The story felt like reading a receipt or a road direction, a lot of uplisting all the way through...

Who is this Anonymous reader that puts these stories in such a bad light? Why is (s)he even bothering to peruse the stories here if they don't appeal to him?

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I laughed my ass off at the ending! Thanks! :-)

the writing isn't great (but who reads this as great lit) but the story line is great. He isn't gay, he is bi as he enjoyed sis several times and brother-in-law once before mom caught them. Sounds like alot fun to me.

I also laughed at the end. A very pleasant story, but not very likely at all.

First, I'm not the anonymous asshole who has been dissing this story. Second, continue this story in part 2 and possibly part three, including mom, and hubby's sister. I think this is a hot story and you can really expand it alot. Don't listen to the idiot saying its poor writing, or that he laughed at the end of it. So much potenial. Please please please write more.

What truly is gross are the people who show their ignorance and total lack of tolerance by deriding the life style of others.

It was a good story and the sexual awaking of her brother.

The gay sex isn't my cup of tea.

Mom finding them and her reaction was funny and good for a laugh as it was her doing in the first place.

I'm sure there will be more to the story with a lot of fucking and sucking from everyone.

Great build up, but then the sex was rushed through.

the end was fucking hilarious

I'd say, this was a pretty good story, the end was to die for too

I have to agree with what's been said before: The buildup is amazing, but the sex itself is really rushed.

The "gay sex" part came as a huge surprise and I have to say, for me it wasn't a pleasant one. On the other hand, the ending made me laugh big time.

TL;DR - first part was awesome, the second not so much.

I agree with some of the other commentators that the build up was a bit shaky. I nearly stopped reading after a few paragraphs because I don't normally like a story that reads too much like a resume; 'he had done this' 'she hadn't done that' 'this is the layout of their house' etc. You could cover their past experiences in a much more natural and readble way, for example, by having Becky and Tim talk about it in bed, which would also be more erotic.

But I was curious to find out if her brother was gay or not so I carried on anyway.

I liked the section where Becky was teasing him into taking the pictures and his shyness came across a bit in that scene with him just getting up and going to bed. But I agree that there should have been some more emotion to the sexual scenes that followed, they were a bit anodyne, to be honest. "She sucked him off" "He fucked her again" it just reads like a report, a bit dry.

I did like the twist with her husband and brother at the end, and mum catching them though. That made me laugh. Serve her right!

Don't give up on it, Seawater. Have another try. :)

it destroyed the story. you wanted to find out if he was gay and he willingly happily fucked his sister then you made him suck a cock ???????? wtf

That is a funny story

are you kidding why did you make the "boys" suck each other? are you gay,or bi? keep that stuff out of straight stories eh?

I don't have a sister so not sure if I do it, but no way in hell I'd give a BJ just so I get a piece from my sister.

No piece of ass is worth sucking a cock. That just fucked up the entire story.

good story until you made it gay!

In my opinion you ruined a very good story. THe goal was to find out if Paul was gay and now Mom comes in and he was SUCKING OFF HIS BROTHER-IN-LAW

Boo...

Should have had Tim's sister surprise them and EVERYBODY FUCKS!!!

i can't say much on the gay part(through i am straight) because i can see my friends with benefits having the same idea. funny ending!

You ruined a good story by having the gay ending. There was no need for this to end with the guys going down on one another. You ruined an otherwise good story with a shitty ending.

Why would you destroy a good story with the guys being gay..?..

Great descriptions of her seducuction of her brother in quest of "the answer" to mom's question. Unlike the other commenters, I think the ending is funny as hell...in the context of the story's premise. I'm not personally a fan of gay male sex...but in your story line....thr ending made me chuckle.

All of these guys complaining about the ending would not complain if it was two girls and was not marked gay.

Keep writing

When there's a three some with 2 girls and they have sex, no one bats an eyelid that they're bisexual. But a soon as things go the other way and it's the 2 men having sex, the comments all turn to the story bring ruined by gay sex. I wasn't that enamoured of it, but I could see the irony and the funny side of matters when Mother caught them at it. An unusual twist compared to other stories.

That said, it was still a very good read. Will there be a second chapter - "Later the same day...." ?

I suspect if the sexes of all of the players was reversed and we ended with a brother convincing his sister to go down on his wife, when his father walked in and caught them, we wouldn't be hearing how the story was ruined by the lesbian ending...

OTOH, she was only "teasing" about "no more of this" but her husband acceded to her request even though it was reasonable to assume she wouldn't actually cut HIM off... not sure if that made the hubby bi-curious or not - and the brother could be either bi-curious OR really unwilling to chance not having more of his sis...

Not sure either of those insights effects the story though... either way, a funny ending. Can't help but wonder if they will actually prefer the mother thinking what she's now thinking or explaining how her kids are now having sex TOGETHER...

Just because someone has a sexual experience with the same sex, doesn't make them gay. It's just an experience. Nothing more, unless the two people take it further.

On a side note, enjoyed the story!!

Good sister stories

to ruin it didn't you? Totally nauseating. By the way, there is only a phony term called homophobia, the correct term is homoNAUSEA.

Pay no attention to that anonymous idiot. This story was great. Jus too short. Wish my girl would want to see me play with another cock. I hope Mom was turned on.

And now we still don't know. But his mother will think he is gay...

Next story, Tim left her for paul, and they lived long and happy...

The end...

You ruined it how can you take a descent story and completely mess it up

So, she finds out that dear little brother is straight - not by setting him up with a co-worker or a girl at the bar, but by seducing him herself. And as if that weren't enough, instead of leaving well enough alone, what does she do? She leverages the poor kid's horniness to force him to suck a cock - HER HUSBAND'S COCK! Then mom walks in on the festivities.

Congratulations! Now the kid will be fucked-up for life.