All Comments on 'Sister or Mother'

by charles7

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KerataKerataover 16 years ago
Is that all ?!!!

very good but where is the rest of the story ,you left the end opened ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
please

please buy an english dictionary and use it or find a teacher of english writing to edit your stories otherwise you would be better off writting in your native languageand saving the readers a lot of headaches trying to figure out what you are saying

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
dumb writer

since you know your english is bad why the hell did you post a story in english with out going through a good editor first? failing to properly edit your story shows you have no concern or feelings for the readers and just want to see your name and story in print. you would have been better off posting it in your native language or not at all. show some pride in your work and delete it a=then rewrite it using a good english editor.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
still, a good story

Okay, let's cut this author some slack. His heart is sure in the right place. In his hero Mike he shows us a great all-round family fucker, a big strong boy who's fair minded, he shares his big stiff prick with both of the family cunts, his sister and his mother. Mike's got plenty of warm creamy semen in his young balls to fill up both family twats, and then some. Let's have more stories of hot family fucking from this wonderfully dirty-minded writer.

HragsHragsabout 4 years ago
More...more...more chapters

Great story. We need more chapters

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