by exfireman
I enjoy reading your chapters and look forward to each new one. Please continue and thanks for your time and imagination. 5*
a BIG firehose handy - gonna need one as hot as it is getting in this tale!
absolutely one of the best ever. I would think this story is worthy of "Hall of Fame" status. I hope you are planning to keep going with this fantastic tale of love & romance.
anothwr amazing chapter. maybe just focus a little more on story and character development cos you have way more then enough sex scenes xD. 5 stars and well done.
I THINK THE STORY STARTED OUT AS A ROMANTIC LOVE STORY OF A BROTHER AND SISTER WHO HAD BAD MARRIAGES. NOW YOU HAVE SHIFTED TOWARD THE OTHER END WITH WAY MORE SEX THAN WHAT'S NECESSARY AND LOSING THE STORYLINE. I'M FINDING MYSELF SKIPPING THE SEX IN ORDER TO CONTINUE THE STORY. LESS SEX, MORE HUMOR (LIKE THE HUMAN PACIFIER), DRAMA, ROMANTIC SETTINGS.
Just love the storyline, but what will the parents say, or does anyone care. It would be cool if the doctors made a mistake about Sarah not being able to have children and J gets her pregnant. 5 stars.