by PaulaApril
Very hot! You never disappoint. Maybe from the literary standpoint there’s not enough narrative tension… everything is just too good to be true… no sisterly jealousy (is that possible?). nobody has a meltdown, contraception isn’t an issue, and even the pancakes come premixed (I bet that wasn’t real maple syrup either). But hey, we’re not here for the thorny bits….
You created a believable and heartfelt solution to the marriage boredom syndrome. The sisters' close relationship and the friendship between the four of them made it all work, and wonderfully so. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing.
I found it awesome and in a few years Abby can be seduced into the fun. 5/5 stars.