All Comments on 'Sister, Sister'

by PaulaApril

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orangecuriousorangecurious4 months ago

Another fabulous story from this top writer

ActingupActingup4 months ago

Very hot! You never disappoint. Maybe from the literary standpoint there’s not enough narrative tension… everything is just too good to be true… no sisterly jealousy (is that possible?). nobody has a meltdown, contraception isn’t an issue, and even the pancakes come premixed (I bet that wasn’t real maple syrup either). But hey, we’re not here for the thorny bits….

IJS0904IJS09044 months ago

You created a believable and heartfelt solution to the marriage boredom syndrome. The sisters' close relationship and the friendship between the four of them made it all work, and wonderfully so. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I found it awesome and in a few years Abby can be seduced into the fun. 5/5 stars.

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Amateur author of erotica. My stories are sometimes an outlet for my deviant or bi-curious thoughts that I'm too nervous to try in real life. May be one day. Some collections and longer works are available on Amazon Kindle for anyone who wants to add my work to their library.