All Comments on 'Sister slave'

Getting knocked up, or being the one who knocks up a sister, mother, daughter, neighbor, classmate, etc., should not be a TURN ON. It's a fucking BUZZ KILL! It's years of punishment for a few seconds of carelessness. And HOW THE FUCK do you explain to your friends and family that you're your nephew's father? Or that your dad is both your baby's father AND grandfather? Knocked Up = Not Erotic.

Brother loves sister. Now he can show more.

She obviously wanted her brother.

Hope you have another chapter SOON

Stopped reading at the 9" cock

Why do writers think big dicks make good stories I think it makes them big dick heads

I usually never read slave or anything like that but I gave ur story a chance and after I read it and.. Yea only thing I didn't like was that it ended keep up the good work

Shouldn't have had any of the boyfriend stuff in there made zero sense. No way they would have sett his up with her brother in the next room while visiting. Why would the boyfriend not call her or figure out what happened so quick. She's begging him for it then 10 min later calls it off and he just says ok doesn't come check on her or call? She damn well knew that wasn't her boyfriend. Can't go from 6" to 9" and not. Also a 9" Dick can't bottom out in pussy nor would one figure then a 9" go so quick from some pain to I love anal. All to quick and fake. But the sex parts were hot.

i dk about the people that might think it is bad but lul it is the best one i have ever read......fuuuuuuuuuucccckkkkkk if only i had someone like this lul

That was hot! Loved every bit of it. Made me turn my vibrator on.

As much as I enjoyed your story, a lot of the dialogue was clunky. Even some of the action was clunky. You used terms like "my boyfriend", "my brother", "sister" in ways that made the flow of your story stop. The way they talk to each other feels very stiff and how quickly Kristin jumped to bring her brother's sex toy is almost concerning. Plus she was given no incentive to answer or do anything Henry asked. Why should she answer anything he asks? What punishment will she receive if she doesn't? Why was Zach so quick to vanish after a conversation just a few minutes ago where she was so eager for him to come over? I hope you keep writing but please find someone to help you edit

Story starts with “tomorrow” and then everythings suddenly that day? Sounds like you changed the plot midway and didnt proof read it.

The boyfriend only says that he doesn't work the next day, so he is free to come over. The "this evening" isn't mentioned, but is implied.

Sexy Story!! Keeping it in the family!