All Comments on 'Sister Syndrome'

by CrazyDaveTrucker60

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john_sixfooterjohn_sixfooteralmost 4 years ago
Crazy wild story!

Your story, your universe, your fantasy!

What an ultimate erotic fantasy! A foursome, MFFF!

Sure, impossible, blah, blah... It was HOT!

linnearlinnearalmost 4 years ago
Perfect, Thank You

I have missed your stories, always a very fun read. I thought for sure he was going to bust his FIL for something illegal and rescue Victoria from her marriage. This one definitely needs a second part. Always love your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wow

What a good story. I hope part 2 is in the works & keep up the good work.

Turbulence1973Turbulence1973almost 4 years ago
Needs a sequel

This was great and would love to read more. Will he knock up his SIL? Well he get with the little sister? Inquiring minds want to know.

davebccanadadavebccanadaalmost 4 years ago
Blue pills, I guess

If in my youth I had been capable of half you write about I would have been considered a superman. It's all in fantasy and simply wild. I love it.

itscalledhazingitscalledhazingalmost 4 years ago
Advice

Just wanted to add my advice to you that maybe you could break up your paragraphs? Some of them are so long that I didn't read it all properly. Each time you have someone say something new then its a new paragraph, it'll make reading the story a lot easier

Maybe it's just me though

dikupinyadikupinyaalmost 4 years ago
nice

plenty of story left. please continue.

NitpicNitpicover 3 years ago
Why

Why did he have to pay for the funeral.

NitpicNitpicover 3 years ago
Why

Why did he pay for the funeral?.

Diecast1Diecast1about 2 years ago

Nice story. AAAA++++

MarrttyMarrtty2 months ago

Never said what the tension was between the girls .

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I've worked a string of jobs. From cab driver to construction worker, to glamour photographer to truck driver. I drive a big truck in New York. I'm also a trainer, having trained over 120 guys to drive tractor trailers.I also write erotic stories and poems.