All Comments on 'Sister Wants Me to Take Her WHERE?'

Good job man, hell of a good read. Hopefully you'll do a part 2.

would be good if you kept going with this story

that was f**king awesome, l wish l had a sister like her, that is a good read, not too many flaws, keep up the great writing, an don't forget this story needs at least a few chapters.

Good story and well written. I'm sure there are a million experiences those two could share that you could write about. All I can say is MORE PLEASE.

Would be good to have a conclusion maybe getting a threesome with her friend that started her off and one or both women getting pregnant and all living together maybe getting the friend and brother married there are loads of possibilities.

It was really well written and genuine.....you may get some negative comments that its not realistic or some other bullshit....but ignore them...its a good story and I hope you continue it with at least one more chapter

Chapter two is in the works.

And you couldn't be bothered to use a chapter number in the title to warn of the BEFORE people open the story?

the start of a good story, just keep it going.

Gave me wood. nice.

Good story, unusual plot start! Maybe he can bring the kinky out of her like no one else!

That was different.

TBC

Don't stop more please . just let there love grow to where they can't live with out each other

Now I, too, want some MORE! NEXT CHAPTER, PLEASE!

Gross. Why would he want to put anything in her after she just sucked off and fucked almost a dozen guys? He should have made her disinfect herself before she got back in the car.

You need to write more chapter(s), please. we the reader want more.

When I wrote this story originally it was to be a one off, but the comments made me think a sequel is in order so I am writing one. l thank you all for your comments.

It's gr at to see you writing again, can't wait to read the sequel

So Hot for a bro and sis. Love how excited she is for her brother. More please!

I liked it but just a few suggestions draw the it out a bit let the readers sorry I mean tell the reader what the brother is feeling as he is fucking her how tight she is dose mone just give a few more details I guess but I did like it

Sure you can move on with next chapter

I hope they have a Doctors appointment booked

If she loves sex that much I hope before the weekend was out you gave her the chance to enjoy anal sex.

Well done, sir!

Just ok and why in the hell did you not have her, or her brother clean that nasty ass bitch up. Sexy or not and I have been around the world, and I am a 64-year-old man and I have been in a few fuck holes from the US all over Europe and in between. I have never fucked a nasty ass whore without her being clean. That part of your story was gross as HELL

Honestly I am all for Sibling Incest but at the expense of cuckolding temporarily your sibling is just sick and wrong.Jen could have just confessed to her Brother that she was attracted to him without all the gloryhole drama and making her brother record it.

Okay maybe Jen was questioning her sexuality of whether she was straight or lesbian or bi but you don't have to fuck 5 or 6 Strangers at a Gloryhole to figure out if your sexually attracted to your brother or not,just get slightly hammered and go and suck your brothers face to determine if you want an answer,not trick him into watching 6 Guys rail you one after another.

Jen granted may be a Slut or a Whore for what she did,but maybe now she knows she should've started with her brother first to figure out her feelings,not take half a football team worth of strangers in one night.

Wow, I see and feel her.