All Comments on 'Sisterfest Ch. 05: Carys & Mike'

Great prequel and probably the best chapter so far, only spotted a few typos here and there, nothing big, except for an error in continuity: In this chapter, Mike is described as the big brother and he's 4 years older, while in Chapter 2 he was described as Carys' younger brother, twice, by Finn.

Anyway, I liked this chapter more, it was more romantic and real than the others, and probably the best way to conclude this series. Well done!

How sad. I'm disappointed to see my comment was deleted (22 May), which had a good amount of praise and constructive criticism, unless saying I rated the piece a 4 was somehow offensive. Never know, I guess.

I didn't delete your previous comment, I never even saw it, so I don't know what happened there; I don't delete adverse comment, I deliberately leave all comment, good, bad, or indifferent up for view, because I think everyone has a fair right to comment, and if I don't like it then I don't, but I won't delete it

Good story. Thanks.

This is the weakest and I found rather hurried. It needs a long and relaxed re-write. It's a shame because you have already shown that you are capable of much better work.

Another awesome story!

Having read 15 or so of your stories and reread at least half of those I would hope there are more to come . I don’t think any of the major studios would have the balls to produce any of your stories I think maybe HBO or Cenimax could as a series that wove a majority of them together to make some excellent entertainment that could go for a number of years. In the meantime please weave another couple of stories into some of the existing stories. We are waiting!

I read this series a year or two ago and have looked for it ever since having forgotten its name. I loved it the first time and I loved it just as much the second time. I don't care about the occasional typo; this is great erotic literature. Somehow though I was just a touch disappointed by the end; it was rushed. We needed to be there at the conception of Carys and Mike's children, rather than just read a report that it had happened. We needed to hear more discussions and understanding exchanges between the two couples: C&M and F&L. You could have squeezed out a little more exquisite sex juice from the plot and characters you created. That said, I can well imagine just how much it takes out of an author to complete a series like this and the temptation, even need to get to the end.