All Comments on 'Sisterly Love Ch. 02'

by Grouchojim

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prop69prop69over 6 years ago
Awesome story..What a lucky guy

Candy and his sister prepared him for some fun.

Now he needs to save up for a beautiful, sexy teenager .

Buenos Noche...es muy magnifico

lantern04lantern04over 6 years ago
Love it.

I look forward to seeing more chapters in this story.

funseeker1186funseeker1186about 6 years ago
Excellent!!

Really really liked this story. Will read all of them. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Very disappointed! You had a half-way decent story going. Then you decide to make him out to be Johnny Wadd Holmes? Really unrealistic and yeah, I get it, it's fantasy, but the story needs to be believable to be really good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Its a sweet story!

rbloch66rbloch66about 1 year ago

This was hilarious!! A lot of fun.

LizziepeeLizziepee9 months ago

Very good only just starting cannot wait to read the rest keep up the good work

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