All Comments on 'Sisterly Love Ch. 05'

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mammoetmammoetover 6 years ago
great story

I hope for at least 5 more chapters there is so much potential in this story.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
FANTASTIC STORY...The series is getting better with every chapter.

Candy is incredible, but Stephie is beyond words.

Brother and Sister is better than any Erotic Coupling

Look forward to more chapters.

Even with Reggie and Sydney fucking Howie, nothing can be better than a sister you love beyond all other women giving herself to you.

How can anything be better?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

You started out well, but then you took a left and another left...I am lost. You wrote this chapter like it was his first time with them, which already happened. Like I said, I am lost!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Continuity in this chapter was abysmal with what seemed like extracts from earlier, when they were friends but now roomies? Acting like sis didn't see them fuck before and get herself off, wtf. Lost the plot!!!

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