All Comments on 'Sisterly Love Ch. 07'

To see where you're going. Generally well written, but periodically you have a strange lapse and go from first person to third person, then back again. It breaks the flow of the story, having to change perspective and then try to figure out who's being discussed.

Example: The pizza came and they fooled around as they ate and got pizza sauce all over one another.

Thanks for sharing. Slainté

An interesting story ... yes jumping around is a little difficult to follow but you have great potential. Of course, having just been caught by his Mom may change things OR maybe not ? His Mom may think about him as growing up etc. Hopefully, another chapter is on the way. Thanks.

Love it when Mom catches her son and GF fucking.

Will Howie ask Mom about her "overnight"

Will Mom join in with Reggie and Howie?

Can't wait for the next chapter.