All Comments on 'Sisters and Girlfriends Ch. 02'

You're missing a few close-center tags, and missing spaces around a number of your italics tags. Makes for hard reading.

I'm sorry most of the story is center-aligned. I just resubmitted an EDIT to the Literotica editors asking them to fix it. Hopefully it should be fixed soon. I'm sorry if it distracts you from the story. That's not how I had written it. Only the pound signs(#) are supposed to be center-aligned, not all of the text between them as well.

Very good writing, love the subject matter. Looking forward to more.

I love this story. I would like to know what will happen next between Ellie and Ariel. Why is Ariel so quiet all of a sudden?????? Please continue???????