All Comments on 'Sisters Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This better be a looooong series!

Damn this was hot and to think it's only the beginning makes it all even better! Their date was fun and I hope to see more of them, the sex was phenomenal and made my toes curl just reading it, joking about Ava was on point but now mom look more and more delicious I doubt that lil' sis can resist the temptation. All in all it should be fun and maybe mom will have something special to share with her girls down the road.

5!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please.

More. Pretty please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yes please

Great story so far please continue!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I have brothers but no sisters and never in a million years would I look at them in a sexual way. It's just too gross.

Clstewart54Clstewart54over 6 years ago
More please

Chapter 3 please mum gets involved

TanhorsTanhorsabout 6 years ago
Good

Really good, my sister's wife particularly loved it. One small note of discord, the move towards bringing mom in, we would rather have a love story then a lesbian orgy, and bringing in the mother will make it much less of a love story.

Thank you for writing this,

Tanhors and family.

SwingdancingnaturistSwingdancingnaturistalmost 4 years ago

I so enjoy your writing, it is so natural that i almost feel i am there looking in, unobserved. So sensual portrayal of two girls, sisters in love...Looking forward to further chapters and other stories...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

😘 HOT & SEXY,,, YES!

Hallo Alison,

Well, well, well, moms interesting... maybe a three·some?

We loved chapter·2, thanks for sharing... 5-Stars..

Queen Jackie and Gay Kat.

LittleAlisonLittleAlisonalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Queen Jackie and Gay Kat, and others. . .

I am still writing, though have other projects I'm working on and this is the only one not paying, so it takes a bit of a back seat.

I've started the next chapter and am a few pages into it. I have the whole thing mapped out and hope to really get into it soon.

thank you all.

Wiz1002Wiz1002over 1 year ago

#2 was just as hot as the 1st, if not more so with the unexpected voyeurism of mum masturbating on the bed with the dildo and possibly thinking about her two daughters.

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