All Comments on 'Sister's Clothing Trap'

The feelings you described (physical sensations, butterflies in the stomach, etc) were very vivid and I recognize most of them myself. Please write more, I really enjoyed what you've started here!

I love the story! Please make a sequel....

Thank you so much, You were able to describe and capture the wonderful feelings so well for me, would love it if you could continue the story. and left me wanting more , Bravo !

Like everyone else is saying, this was totally amazing. LOVE IT- more please

I understand if your time is limited . However some terrific ground work has been established for a series with this story of Alex and his sister . The party being so important for one thing ? Kind of intriguing . I hope that you will consider continuing .

As a crossdresser that would love to be someones sub this story was really hot . I don't want more I need more please master. Tom/Tammie

I like that it has closure to the scene, but it does feel more like a first chapter than anything. I hope you continue it. I would enjoy reading more and finding out more about her motives even if it is only as they are revealed to Alex.

Oh please please continue this!

Wonderfully told and paced. Very erotic and easy to relate to. Obviously, there is potential for so many more adventures for Riley and Alex. Your visuals are perfect and so is your story-telling. Your fans will be waiting and I'll be as close to the front of the line as I can get. You see you made me very wet.

xoxo,

Di

Please continue this. I can see this going in many different directions and i honestly can't wait to see more from these characters.

Great story would live more and how they continue

You can't leave us hanging like this! We've been set up just like Alex, so please give us more. What will Riley demand of Alex? How will he react? Humiliation and arousal are an explosive mix, so again, please, don't leave Alex and your readers hanging. He needs it and so do we.

Thanks for the wonderful, exciting and sexy story. Please continue when you can, I am so anxious to read more about Alex and Riley .. TG Tiffany

PleaseContinue this story Lucys Fox.

LostBoy

Wonderful story! So wish I was Alex! Please write more :)

This is such a fun story with infinite possibilities and I hope you get inspired to continue! Until then, I'll check out your other tales and keep checking for updates. Carpe diem

This can't end here what about the people at the party she had to talk to ??? What happens next we have to know

I truly appreciate and love this story . it's only one of few that made me feel like I was in the story. I hope you are going to add to the story. Please Let me know if you do. I will apostate it very much. Thank you.

Wish I was Alex. Lucky bastard. lol

Squealing and Giddy with this story,i want more,Please-Please-Please.loves,jennifur e.z.💜💜

too short of a story.

Mmmm. I adore when authors let readers into the character's thoughts & feelings. You've done that so verrrry well. Although there are no Next Chapter indicators, I'm going to check out your submissions (such an appropriate term for BDSM themed stories, don't you think?).

Much thanks.

I really enjoyed this can’t wait to read more I hope she trains him and takes him out as her offsider plus helps him to get Expose for his art but also use it to keep him in line as I can see them moving in with each other as soon as there parents find out that his a cross dresser and she’s been helping him them she can give him hormones so he gets B cup chest and be her toy gurl 24/7 then she can really brake him and him

I wish there were better clubs in Fotitude to meet gurl’s like Alex then what’s there is in Bris there all to hetro or butch for my liking

Please write more

Oh for the love of God, please continue this, it's amazing!

I really enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing.

Nicely done! I could picture Alex and how he looked. His pleasure from the silky panties resonated with me. I find that silky/satiny material touching the sensitive head of me penis always gets me hard, so this story got me a little turned on. Now I have a question: Do you write your stories with the hope that they'll turn on your readers and get them to masturbate? Thanks!

I really loved this and wished t had happened to me when I was younger. I would love for you to write about them again just the two of them with out involving anyone else

you know how to turn me on more please

is there more too cum?

Would love to have had a sister like this

Would have done anything she wanted