All Comments on 'Sisters in the Night'

Absolutely no incest value other than the occasional touch between the sisters, this should be in the 'erotic encounters' section, as it could have been lifted straight from the pages of Playboy or Oui, and has none of the sense of an illicit encounter that makes the Incest & Taboo genre so spicy

Believeable and incredibly hot!

this would be better in the erotic couples area maybe even the NONEROTIC area deffinetly doesn't belong in the incest area. was kind of boring i couldn't get much past the first page.

Very well written, thanks for sharing and keep it up!

Don't get me wrong, you described things well. But... The heat never started up. A brief description of how the sisters look wasn't enough. I'm thinking the way the story started knowing sex was all but a done fact. I can't put my finger on the best way to say what the story needs. Anyway; keep writing and keep in mind intra-family sex, or sexual behavior defines incest. The story was a definite Taboo qualified story with who and when. Keep up writing here.

RS

My apologies to all Incest/Taboo readers that have been misled by my story getting bumped into that category instead of Group Sex. Of course there's no real incest - the story was written specifically to exclude any incest. Any touching or the one playful kiss between the sisters was done to tease the male character (Jack) - not for either of their own sexual gratification. Look at the story tags I used: no incest.

Being a new author I have no idea what "red line" (if any) pushed this story into the I/T category. I'll post on the author's forum to see if there's any remedy to this. Frankly, I doubt if any reader finding this story in Group Sex would have said "Eww, incest! Why wasn't I warned?"

There are a lot of losers in this: a) readers that thought they were getting an incest story and are pissed that isn't what happens; b) readers that could have been looking for a new Group Sex (or Erotic Encounters) story to read & passed on it because they are turned off by I/T stories; c) and me, who will get labeled as a I/T author, slammed by I/T fans for deceiving them, and ignored by the audience I was trying to reach.

Oh well - guess I need to get back to writing the next story. Hey, if I ever get a hot incest story idea, I will proudly post to that category. But right now, I'm trying to establish a rep as an Erotic Encounters author - which I would have posted to, except there are 3 people in the room with their clothes off having sex, so I figured Group Sex, right?

For the read.

what the others said. It was incest (two sisters) and I enjoyed it. How about the morning after?

the webmasters went by your title if you had used something that didn't suggest incest it would have been better. delete and rewrite it and ask the webmasters WHY they put it in the wrong catagory.

And it has been around for a while. How about a second chapter about the next morning.

Many thanks to all those who have viewed, voted, favorited, and commented. When I first laid out the story, I intended it to be a one-off. I now realize that what might happen the morning after would be a natural sequel. I expect that chapter will be written eventually; but first, I need to complete several other stories before I tackle this.

Looks like there will always be disagreement about whether this story should be in Incest/Taboo or Group Sex. My argument is this: lots of other stories involving sisters have been allowed to go in the Group category, so why not mine? As an experiment, I did a search with the keyword “sisters” in the Group category. I got over a thousand hits (of about 19K stories in Group). I read 3 at random, and all of them had full on incest sex between the sisters. Go figure. Heh, I feel like I was pulled over for speeding when everyone else on the road was going even faster.

was a near perfect threesome, MFF. None of this where the women are enjoying each other and the guy comes in when they want him to. Then he's just a boy toy. Good job Ken.....