All Comments on 'Sister's Milk'

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dodgeboy2dodgeboy2over 3 years ago
Good story

This was overall a good story, I myself wish you had only taken it to the point of him drinking her milk leaving other things to the readers imagination of what might happen next. A second part could have had them leading to a little more, the each subsequent part leading to a little more.

This again is just my opinion, but I did find it a good storyline.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More!!!

This story really deserves more chapters. Hopefully they will have a big family and Jenny can find a way to still be a teacher. Maybe as an online tutor or getting back to being in public and going for her degree since Mike helped her with her confidence. Or maybe she has found a new purpose with Mike in her life. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great Story

Love the story line, has a lot of potential to become an entire family affair!

greatpersonhooraygreatpersonhoorayover 3 years ago

Really great story! Definitely has potential to be a series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Maybe mom would like him also?

Mom must have been excited to see them together... and maybe want some also?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Brother helps

Maybe now that her brother has just pumped a few loads of his potent sperm into her fertile, unprotected pussy...she gets pregnant and this will normal things out for her body, yet still keeping the huge milky Titties!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
mmm keep going

loved the way the mom approved at the end, maybe make it so he gets addicted to the milk and is under her control as the milk starts to make his dick grow bigger ect

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Loved It

Great story, so enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Needs a part 2

Loved it for the slow yet passionate burn. Should definitely write a part 2!

muskyboymuskyboyover 3 years ago

Need some more parts...Mom, babies

cursrahcursrahover 3 years ago

more parts please

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot

Such a good storyline and ending !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Yummmmmmmmmy

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Great build up and pay off!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
pregnant part

can you do second part please where she could get pregnant please. This is so good without trying hard!

Sybaris_CaesarSybaris_Caesarover 3 years ago
Too rushed at the end.

I wouldn't have minded if the first chapter only consisted of sucking. It's erotic enough as it is. But sucking to fucking transitioned too quickly. Felt too rushed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Mom

How about a sequel about the mom? You can’t tell me about those boobs and big ass and not give me a story.

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 3 years ago

If she gets pregnant her baby would solve the excess milk problem. :-D

BullocksBullocksover 3 years ago
Damn this was hot

How about a part 2 or 3?

Tantricteacher2Tantricteacher2about 3 years ago

I loved it. Please read Two More Secrets and tell me what you think.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved this story. A part 2 of this story would be great. A loving brother taking care of his sister.

old_riderold_riderabout 2 years ago

More chapters please!!! Seems like mom could be tempted to join in.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Why do so many others in the comment section want the mom to join in on the fun?

The story was perfect with just the siblings having at it; it doesn't always have to include the whole family.

Needless to say, the author did well.

NobleGent45NobleGent45almost 2 years ago

WOW! This is abut as good as it gets, as near to perfect as can be!!! Would LOVE to hear more

M

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

So sweet and loving. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Why do I get the feeling mum has been lacing Jenny's food with hormones and is responsible for the lactation and breast enlargement....

Wendywants2BtakenWendywants2Btakenabout 2 months ago

I love my nipples sucked as I’m getting fucked I’m sorry I don’t have milk available for my lover❤️❤️❤️

cursrahcursrahabout 1 month ago

it would be nice to get a second chapter

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