by Shoestrings
This was overall a good story, I myself wish you had only taken it to the point of him drinking her milk leaving other things to the readers imagination of what might happen next. A second part could have had them leading to a little more, the each subsequent part leading to a little more.
This again is just my opinion, but I did find it a good storyline.
This story really deserves more chapters. Hopefully they will have a big family and Jenny can find a way to still be a teacher. Maybe as an online tutor or getting back to being in public and going for her degree since Mike helped her with her confidence. Or maybe she has found a new purpose with Mike in her life. Please write more!
Love the story line, has a lot of potential to become an entire family affair!
Mom must have been excited to see them together... and maybe want some also?
Maybe now that her brother has just pumped a few loads of his potent sperm into her fertile, unprotected pussy...she gets pregnant and this will normal things out for her body, yet still keeping the huge milky Titties!
loved the way the mom approved at the end, maybe make it so he gets addicted to the milk and is under her control as the milk starts to make his dick grow bigger ect
Loved it for the slow yet passionate burn. Should definitely write a part 2!
can you do second part please where she could get pregnant please. This is so good without trying hard!
I wouldn't have minded if the first chapter only consisted of sucking. It's erotic enough as it is. But sucking to fucking transitioned too quickly. Felt too rushed.
How about a sequel about the mom? You can’t tell me about those boobs and big ass and not give me a story.
I loved it. Please read Two More Secrets and tell me what you think.
Loved this story. A part 2 of this story would be great. A loving brother taking care of his sister.
Why do so many others in the comment section want the mom to join in on the fun?
The story was perfect with just the siblings having at it; it doesn't always have to include the whole family.
Needless to say, the author did well.
WOW! This is abut as good as it gets, as near to perfect as can be!!! Would LOVE to hear more
M
Why do I get the feeling mum has been lacing Jenny's food with hormones and is responsible for the lactation and breast enlargement....
I love my nipples sucked as I’m getting fucked I’m sorry I don’t have milk available for my lover❤️❤️❤️