All Comments on 'Sisters Pt. 01'

I truly enjoyed reading this story and I do hope you will continue. Your stlye of writing does make the character of Jane sound well educated as a good teacher should be . Thanks for sharing and please a second chapter.

There are some aspect that I found good (the new found purpose and rediscovering of herself) and others that were bad or poorly defined (both daughters enslaving their mother and Jane submitting just like that). That said, I'm very curious about what's coming next.