All Comments on 'Sister's Shower Experience Ch. 02'

the story is cute, however it would help if you used spellcheck.

SPELLING NEEDS WORK, NEED MORE DETAIL, UR CONTINUNING AREN'T U

It need more erotica plus more about his brother & sister and be sure spell more correctly

Interesting plot which deserves to be a series but 3+ months is far too long to give us Ch.03.

A word of advice, it is not a spell check you need, you really must tighten up on your English Grammar and eliminate blatent errors such as 'brang', the correct word is 'brought'. You need to learn the correct use of 'I', 'me', 'us', 'we' and 'myself' etc.

However, an enjoyable start so keep them 'cumming'.

the story is interesting but you need to work on grammar a bit it's hard to tell what "Later on I let my brother about my brother slip." means and a few other places as well

too frustrating to read, way not good grammar