All Comments on 'Sister's Surprising Discovery Ch. 03'

In the title of the series and the synopsis for the first two chapters, "sister" refers to Beki, his sister. So, when the synopsis for this one reads "Sister is turned into a fucktoy by family and friends." it's very easy to think Sister is Beki and not Kath.

I loved your story up till you added Dwain and Carl. What is it that many writers feel the need to add a black man?