All Comments on 'Sister's Surprising Discovery'

Enjoyed your story. Fun read and pace kept it moving along well.

I didn't get past the first few paragraphs. I don't need an explanation of how you changed your mothers name to your sisters name and whose hair color is whose and whats this is that all of that crap. Just write the damn story and get on with it..

This was and is still a terrible story. Sorry.

Please more of this story. Definitely need to include mum and dad. Family sex is so hot

I'm enjoying your story very much , I've been involved with my daughter for many years and enjoy our " alone time " so I can truly admit I know what it's like from f

The first touch to making love then hiding it from everyone else

Loved the story.

Well written and a great fantasy.

Can't wait to read more.

Oh to have had a Sister like Beki.....ha ha ha

Thanks for a good read.

I wish my sister's reaction was this positive.

But that why I enjoy fantasy.

Pretty short story but pretty good, would love to see where it goes. Only thing is, did it actually happen, if you’re writing as things actually happen that’s cool, have fun haha

Really? He pulls his dick out of her ass and she immediately starts sucking him off? That's in terrible taste in every sense of the word.

Great story. Isn't there another chapter? Do they end up fucking their step mum? Feels like the story is unfinished .

I Agree that there’s too much initial exposition that is boring, I.e. it doesn’t serve the Erotic.

Another of my pet peeves is here in spades: The male narrator is the passive actor corrupted in action by an amoral or morally unconcerned female who initiates (takes the risk of the first move) the sex. This allows the narrator to get laid without taking responsibility for doing it.

One should ask why the female is so morally unconcerned.

I know we’re talking fantasy, and suddenly amoral sisters are just that. But the fire of the erotic is fueled by moral tension in each character. By erasing it in one character, one gives up half of that fuel.