All Comments on 'Sitting for Liz and Cassie Ch. 01'

Lovely, exciting and arousing. Five stars, of course!

for a first time Author it was not bad, just hope her dad does not find out what happened, or she might lose her babysitting job

I love it very much I hope you will write more in the future. Thank you sharing.

Really enjoyable story. A lovely balance of innocence and awakening of sexual awareness. Am anticipating your future work with a sense of excitement.

Yo! This writing is by far the best I've seen written on this site. You are doing great!

Good for first time... Did I get right, that you are Male writer> You have great knowledge of the female body....Keep writing...!

I’m sorry but the fact you haven’t noticed that you repeat words that make the story very jaunty and stagering throws what may have been a good story totally out of wack. I only made it through the first three paragraphs.

that was erotic and so very well written