All Comments on 'Six of a Kind Pt. 01'

Wtf man you give us this awesome new story. Then you end on one hell of a cliffhanger. So damn cruel!

so far

priceless

Well you could see that coming from a mile off.

Just as brilliant as always.

I think I'm gonna love this one just like all your other work.

lol i fucking hate cliffhangers. Also looking forward to more lust at first sight and i hope we get more harem sisters also at some point. i absolutely love every story of yours that i have read.

can't wait for more of your stories

ok this sounds like a great story .

Well done! I am captivated. Please continue. 😎

Reminds me of a story called The island

Great as always. Don’t appreciate being called out in the forward like that tho 😜

OK, I know you love Harem Stories and cliff hangers! Well done. Love your stories and the way you tell them. Looking forward to the next episode(s).

I'm guessing it's 5 sisters and Rick.

Cheers

SAGE

Awesome set-up! I am sure it will be great like the rest of your stories. Looking forward to reading more! Thank you for sharing your work.

What a start! Can’t wait for more. Thanks for sharing!

You keep astounding me with your talent. You already know how much I love reading stories you write about our wonderful country. Eager for more of this one too. Top job

Five stars and fav.

That being said this is not your best work. I am a huge fan of yours, but this just isn't hitting the mark like the rest.

By the end of page six I felt like I was reading a story about a guy drowning in fresh water while someone was trying to get him to drink a bottle of Cape Grim. Sure as weird as it sounds it could happen; not likely but could happen. You have a street kid that distrusts the rich and lawyers and signing things, yet even after he says everything in him is telling him no, run, leave. He doesn't follow his instincts that have kept him alive and so on. I just have a hard time buying it. I've had this problem with other authors too, they are so set in the plot the envision that they force the MC there (into that scenario) even when it goes against the MC's beliefs, morals, etc.; that they themselves set up. I mean, who is going to 'believe' in a character when the author describes him as a morally religious man that would never cheat on his wife with her sister (unless she acts him twice)

Sorry didn't mean to rant at least not here. Like I said it's still 5 stars and fav and I can't wait till the next part cause I know once we get passed all this disconjointed set up, it'll be a great story.

I think I'm mostly with Fuzzy_Kbear on this one. Aside from that, the premise is interesting, even if it is a classic rags to riches scenario. I am curious to see how you'll spin your version of that type of tale going forward. I gave it a 4/5 for the first chapter.

Always with the God damn twists and cliffhangers man, but it's a damn good way to keep people reading a good story so keep it up

Well, at this point, the beginning, your plot reads like, 'Threads: The Island', by JammyJimmy.

Hope that you can do justice to this story because I find it more interesting than your other ones.

Bookmarked and followed and rated 5. Please don't make us wait too long for the next installment.

Thank you for writing down your ideas and sharing them with us.

Wow. A very good new story. And it ends with a cliffhanger. What's Rick going to do now after meeting his sisters? and one of them is Maya who he just had a sexual encounter? Totally big mystery bout to be revealed in the next part.

Threads: The Island

Excited for this story

I agree with SI33pingforest. Great story telegraphed with Maya having to fly to Queensland and then you leave it on a major cliff hanger with Rick meeting his 4 sisters.

Great so far.

Great first part looking for more soon.

Can’t wait to read part 2. Seriously, please post soon

Had a feeling maya was gonna be a sister. The others tho was a pleasant surprise. Loving your work still! 5/5

Love your writing and now I will be following this story as well as your others. Thank you

Yes I do know who I am!! Look forward to reading this one too!

Classic Darth, write an amazing story, only to leave us hanging on to dear life without fingertips on the edge of a cliff, swearing and screaming about how he's a dick for what he does to us, and then screaming at him to hurry up and write the next one..... GOG DAMN IT!!!!!

5 Stars, Two Thumbs Up, and a Double Middle Finger for doing this to us again!!!

Where's Part 2? Cracking opening and a real cliff hanger

Let the games begin! This circus promises to be fun!

Well written........I can't wait to read the next part!!!

I’m hooked!

*Insert DJ Khalid meme* “Another one!”

Loved it the whole way through. Perfect amount of suspense to make this cliff not so bad to dangle off of for a bit.

Love it. Hope he brings in the foster siblings

I haven't read a single story of yours yet that wasn't awesome. Can't wait to see where you take this one. And since you've put in cameos in the others, I'm gonna have to go back and see if Rick or his sisters had a previous mention. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

Awesome start, love to see where you take this one

So far so good can’t wait to read more hopefully this go around we can speed run Hayley’s scummy bf outta the picture asap unlike Craig in LAFS unneeded boyfriend drama is lame.

Loved This Story!

Caused goosebumps on my neck...

Rarely happens to this miserable old git.

Thank You.

Great start to the story...I am little upset at myself for starting it though as now I have to wait for rest

Awesome cliffhanger and surprise. Well done buddy. Can't wait to read the next installment.

I could see it comming

While i guess we can figure it out exactly i guess this happens what 2-3 years before jason parks story(hayley ofcourse is the giveaway) so i guess 6 here will sooner or later meet jason and co.

But i would like to see some timeline of stories

Drat. Should have known better then to read a part one by you the day it posted. Now I gotta wait!!

loved it. looking forward to more

The setup for this story is much to easy, I guess there is one more unknown sister in the wind, and before long Rick will have his very own sister harem, a bit obvious but still a good read, let’s see what the future brings?

ok my friend, as usual you have me hooked already. Lets try to keep the pace going here shall we? Lets not drag this out for 5 years...... :)

I love your writing. Your one of my favorites on here. Seems like a great story so far. I cant wait for more.

Hated the beginning of the story. Does everyone ONLY drink beer and alcohol? And the smoking and mentioning of drugs, even though Rick hates them. The MC (Rick) is a minor criminal and comes off as an ass. At least he protects his foster sister. Can't stand Mike at all! And just the line in the story where Maya says that she's never squirted with a man, only women, really pissed me off. Seems Darth loves his bisexual/lesbian women. That crap needs to go! It's what's ruined all of his stories thus far and I can already see this one going that way. Straight into the bisexual toilet.

Also, the story had many typo errors. Get a better editor. 2*

Really great stuff. I’ve read all of your stuff please keep it coming

What a good read and amazing buildup. Looking forward to more!

Awesome start. Then I looked at how long it takes to get the next installment and I am bummed that we have to wait so long to get the next part. Wouldn't be bummed if it wasn't so good.

Great start even though the reader has to suspend belief at some of the twists and turns.

Oh this is great. SO glad ur back and writing again. You have been missed... Cannot wait for more of this and the rest of the great stuff you write..

Loved it! Well up to your usual high standard. Can't wait for part 2!

I almost never comment on stories but this is too good not to. I need part 2. 5 stars all the way. Genius.

Good start. Obvious Maya was a sister but more interesting is the others at this stage, 2 "Brits" and an Aussie. Who's the sixth going to be?

I'm still going to read more before coming to a solid conclusion. The title "Six Of A Kind" had me expecting that Richard had 5 other blood relatives lurking around somewhere. Then when he and Maya clicked together like two peas in a pod, both having the same birthday, I immediately figured her for a twin sister. Then when she revealed that she was a foster kid too, I knew for a fact that she and Richard were siblings. But I didn't expect them to be each a sextuplet until Chloe was revealed. Once I learned that she had the same birthday as Richard and Maya, I knew that there would be five girls and Richard would be the one and only guy.

I'm looking forward to reading more of this, but I was somewhat put off by Richard smoking weed. His felonious behavior put me off as well. I did take into account his dressing down Trevor for dealing drugs in his presence as a positive response. But overall, I'm disappointed that someone of poor morals is going to be the Protagonist in your story that suddenly receives a life of luxury. Bad people should not come away smelling like a rose. Richard isn't a wretched human being, but he hasn't displayed but one or two redeeming qualities and certainly doesn't deserve the windfall that you're going to bestow upon him.

I would have enjoyed this a lot better if you had styled him more as an extremely poor but honest guy. 3/5

Awesome to see a new story from you! I love the setup and can’t wait to see where it goes! Thank you so much! :)

Another fantastic piece from you! Can't wait to see where this story goes!

Awesome. Can’t wait for the next part

5 stars. An instinct favorite story. Just like "Lust at first sight". You are a good story teller. Can't what for the next installment. But waiting for to long for more" Lust asset first sight".

Well that was a wild comment... Walked straight out of the 50's didn't you? Not only are we on a porn site, we're squarely in the fetish section of said porn site. And the weed is what you have a problem with? This has to be a troll, right? Right?

Darth welcome back, again Ive fallen under your spell with yet another story holding so much promise of things to come i anxiously await the next installment on this one ( and honestly on any of your other tales) keep up the great work, your fans await !!!!!!!!! 5(+) stars as always

First we got a half sister plus her friends and a step mom. Then we got four half sister. Now we got FIVE full blood sisters, and sextuplets at that??

Author sure do jump over a lot of them stairs. Which is absolutely perfect👌

Nice cliffhanger! I suspected something was going to happen between the two of them. I have read all of your stories so far. With the way this one has begun, I do not anticipate that I will be disappointed.

I would like to say, your writing has improved with time. I am looking forward to the up coming releases in this story, as well as your other stories.

Thank you, Troy C.

This is freakin’ brilliant. Superbly written with detailed and varied characters. I can’t wait for more.

Wow, you got me hooked! Bring them on!

You’re leaving us hanging? Come on, man, give us another installment! This is great character work. I’ve got to know how it goes.

Please don't string this out to add a chapter every 2-3 months. Finish this soon. I really like the story so far. It is well written and flows in a logical order. Please write a chapter every week.

Hm.. This was an interesting for sure. I have to ask is this story a sort of 'Prequel' to your 'Harem Sisters' story? Or is Hayley & Leon & Lucy w/a White Mercedes purely coincidental?.. lol.

I'm definitely looking fwd to the rest of this story as well as (hopefully) the rest of Harem Sisters. Though, it would be interesting to see if you don't have this one merge with Harem Sisters & or another story at some point. - Keep em coming I do really enjoy ur writing.

Ok dayum-it!!!!, even though I saw it coming, I HATE CLIFF HANGERS!!!! Should have at least had Rick faint or something. I mean, COME ON !!! 5/5 and wishing pt 2 was out already!

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Another

Another great submission! Looking forward to its follow up!

5 stars! I’ve enjoyed all of your stories. Thank you for another great series to look forward to.

I wonder if Samantha, Chloe, and Zoe are squirters too?

Also, to other commenters whining about updates not coming quick enough for your liking, updates might come quicker if you donated some money to the author. Not willing to do that? Then be quiet and enjoy the stories when they come.

Very good story looking forward to the rest of it

Very good can’t wait for next chapters

This is interesting, wonder how the others are going to react to him and maya being a thing

Come on bro this is the best of the best can't wait for the next part 🔥🔥

.You certainly got my attention. Now, come on with the rest of this story. We're all waiting.

Nice work DA. Your story reminds me of a few of the great stories in this section on here. I look forward to see where you lead us. Thanks!

Que buena historia, acabo de leer sobre Nick y sus hermanas, debo de decir que que quedé esperando el siguiente capítulo, no importa, me tienes enganchado con ésta, espero que no tardes mucho, saludos.

I am jumping in situ. I need more. Please give me more.

This has some serious potential. Looking forward to the next part!

Great Story DA. Keep it coming. Love all your stories!

Great beginning of a story, but a fucked ending! Left hanging, and what about the other two? This is about like the old radio mysteries I listened to when I was a small child. That I loved and hated at the same time. Just as I was really into it, it hit the chime and told me tune in next week. Great work, by the way...

Ima NEED that next part in a reasonable time, ok?

Bravo Darthaussie!

I was giggling (particularly at Mike's behaviour) often, enthralled by your portrayal of characters and personalities. I find myself wanting more and eagerly awaiting the next part.

Ant.

Dude! I think i know where this story is going, but you have to finish it. Its too good jus leave someone hanging. Your doing a great job of writing. Keep going.

It looks like you havs fan club thats chomping at the bit. Lol.

Great story so far! I hope more parts are coming soon.

Thanks

This is good. Really good.

Damn... That awkward moment when you set-out to write an erotic fiction, only for it to be a biography of a Liverpool Eshay.

Interesting beginning, just hope it doesn't take six months to a year to see another chapter like your other stories

Just fucking great! Not only will we have to wait longer for a continuation of “Lust at First Sight”, but if your posting schedule remains consistent, we’ll need the wait anywhere from 3-5 months for more of this.

And now the constant cycle of rescanning the previously posted tales to get back up to speed continues.

You’re exhausting! But, so far, worth the wait.

Oh my! I hope the writing is quick, lol. Thank you.

This story is definitely going the route of lust at first sight don't get me wrong it's a pretty good story so far but I still can't wait for the next part of lust at first sight nor can I wait for the next part of harem sisters just to see if you turn back around to where the girls actually pay attention to him even solo cause the later parts of that series with the exception of the sister for now the others pretty stopped having anything to do with him which started ruin it cause it's no longer a harem

Brilliant story so far really looking forward to the next installment.

lmfao that everyone is just flaming you for ditching your stories

but that's an incredibly valid complaint, I guess I should just wait until there's a bit more to get invested in this story

Looks good so far. The back story might have been a touch long and the reveal of the sister a bit obvious but those are minor things. Looking forward to the rest of the story. Happy Writing.

Well crafted as I've come to expect from your stories. I really appreciate your style, great story lines and characters. The suspense you create, as at the end of this chapter, leaves me impatient for the next installment. Which brings me to my only quibble with your stories, the time between chapters. I've been in suspense too long waiting for the next installments of Harem Sister and Nick and his Sisters. Please finish them before getting too into this new venture. I know it's sometimes hard to stick with existing projects when something new is rearing it's head but they are great stories and deserve to be finished in the not too distant future. All your creative juices could then be directed to Six of a Kind. I'd hate for it to drag out for years as well.

Cheers and keep creating.