All Comments on 'Sixes and Sevens Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hmmm

Love the story so far but given this writers past stories, regardless of how much the main char finds happiness elsewhere, always returns to the person who ‘betrayed’ or cheated. I am really hoping this tired line isnt being done here, love to see this author go past this one constant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Here we go again.

Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Your superior writing and storytelling skills continue to impress me. I've read most of your stories-- I think there's just one more to read. And now this one. Ciao.

tazz317tazz317over 5 years ago
I AM SURE THESE NUMBERS WILL RUN INTO THE TEENS

and in might be on other continents TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Top Notch

Well written and and narratively compelling.

Freddog6601Freddog6601over 5 years ago
Unfinished

Some twists and turns to this story kept it interesting.

Is this the last chapter?

It would be a shame to see him get back with a woman with a propensity to be leasily led astray.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 5 years ago
Really good

Look for the next chapter

bruce22bruce22over 5 years ago
Great story

This one is full of excitement and great moments in the sexual and emotional lives of the couple. The tension about will she fall to the alpha-males who go after her is only in our and his minds.

gopher25gopher25over 3 years ago
Obvious solution?

Excellent story. Why don't they reach the obvious solution? Sam goes to Vancouver for a month. Then she returns to UK and stays with Aiden for a couple of months. During that time they both confirm their feelings for each other and get married. Then every three months they take a two week trip to Vancouver together to spend time with her family and friends. She gets a job in UK, and they live happily ever after. Of course, this doesn't make a very interesting story, so I'm sure there will be lots of crisis and heartbreak instead. 8>}

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I live the the North West of England, where we get more than our share of rain, hence my pen-name. Before I retired, more years ago than I care to think about, I had a job which exercised my mind to the full. I never had time to write anything but text books and manuals. Si...

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