All Comments on 'Sixes and Sevens Pt. 06'

with not and end or closure in sight, TK U MLJ LV NV

Never been a fan of Sam's character. It's like her entire character is meant to be Aiden's perfect woman reward for being the best boy he could be. And now you've shown your cards by giving her first person perspective treatment, (which was done sloppily and broke the flow of the story) giving away how the rest of the story is going to go. It just bugs me because everything else about the story is so well written, and she has all the character depth of a cardboard cutout. There's four more chapters to come, so maybe I'll come around, who knows.

Hopefully this didn't come off as overly harsh. I wouldn't have such a strong opinion if I wasn't as invested in the story as I am, thank you for writing and posting this story here for everyone.

Been thinking on where this series is going. I've decided that this is about an a man who thinks he's an adult learning how to finally be one, getting all the lessons from the women in his life. But then again, maybe that is the way all men learn how to be an adult. It's a good story. Keep up the good work!

Seems you have lost yourself in the story and hit a road block. Everyone is spinning their wheels making a lot of shit smelling smoke, and not achieving anything.

Hopefully you decide to allow something to happen instead of circling around that stinky smoke.

It is clear that it is on Sam to bridge the gap. I hope!