All Comments on 'Ski-In, Ski-Out'

Great opportunity to develop this story, so I’m really hoping for more. It’s a really nice start with endless options for adventure on and off the slopes. Well written- keep it going!

Too rushed. Premature intimacy. Not clear at all why they should be attracted. Our MC is poorly defined. Not worth spending any time on this 3*

Too brief and a bit rushed. Needs more who and why to go with the where and what you are more comfortable with. More backstory and character development needed. But what you did write was well done. Now on to the next episode.

A very nice and unexpected warm opening in the story, but - where so where is the whole actual story???

We need more, like the rest!

Good start though!

Thank you all for your feedback! There will be plenty more from Scott and Camille soon.