by Clare_Ca_2
Sorry , but writing in an accent just doesnt work , I also gave up after 2 paragraphs
and here is a 1 to help offset that undeserved 5 you gave it bonnie!!!
the story is hot trash!
And getting your mom/sis/whatever to give you 5 stars is a stupid move, but to make up for it, here's 1 star, I hope you go away and never stain this site with your trashy crap ever again. Go away and stay away.
I had to scroll through all the pages just to say this... THIS SUCKS!
When your readers have to go back and triple check words and make sense of stupidity then the story looses it's roll.
Don't try this again. In fact, don't write again.
Please add a ZERO rating. (It hurts having to give this one star!)