All Comments on 'Sky High After Dark - Cosmic'

Only at about page 3-4 where ever the showdown in dc is placed, anyway, I’m like 90% sure you made an error when you say the NSA can’t operate on US soil when I’m pretty sure it’s the CIA that’s a big no no. There’s also the fact that you misled coordinates and a few other things in the first few pages.

A great addition to the saga left me wanting more looking forward to seeing the fallout of the aron isabel troy triangle as we all know one of arons big hangups is when it comes time to pair up for sex was being displaced and that's kinda what happened he showed up and was cast aside so I wonder if this blowup ruined the mood and they didn't have sex like how could one get into the mood when your partner chased someone else or they realized how upset they caused their brother and couldn't perform then there's the question of whether troy's sperm is viable since his core temperature is very cold even at refrigerators temperature they don't swim well. Either way I'm dying to see how things go which is funny because in second book I felt the relationship between those 2 characters came out of nowhere and looked forced given her and arons interactions in the first book and now I'm hooked

loved this as all of them soul71-but I didnt understand the epilogue -help me ?

Great installment to this series. Really looking forward to more. Noticed some minor errors but for me didn't spoil the story as I understood was you where getting at. Keep them coming.

Vera is the true villan of this story. The overbearing control freak ruins every scene she's in, hopefully she turns out to be the The Collector so she can experience sadistic mode. But it seems to be the way you write the mother character, like Darla, Anna, Helen, Amanda, or Katherine. Which is a shame, because everything else makes this story amazing.

You amazed me with this one! So creative and exciting. Thanks for this!

Looking forward for the next book, I love how the MC's character development is shown throughout the series. Standing firm to his ideals and principles, not letting anyone undermine him but still being reasonable enough for his family. The fallout of the the triangle (Aron, Issy and Troy) got me intrigue, and I'm hoping it will be expanded more on the next book. Soul71, keep up the good work, one of the best authors I ever follow...

Loved it! Your the best, Soul71. 25 BIG FUCKING STARS! No one hold a candle to your stories.

Still a whole bunch that is unanswered. Yet you put The End and then an epilogue which didn't close out anything. Hopefully more to come.

You are evil, evil person.

To do the end thing, on nothing like an ending. Then an epilogue that is obviously just a tease.

So looking forward to where you go with this in the future

dude I can't wait for the next one I'm curious to where you take his nemesis and their conflict like limitless possibilities plus gotta see how things turn out with the troy issy and aron triangle I'm betting troy turns out to be sterile because his core temp is in the below zero range but in all honesty the first book led me to believe aron and her were a much better fit and the whole troy finally coming around after all the others pretty much cut him off makes his decision sound suspect

Another great chapter can't wait for more

please continue

Great stuff. Grouch6977

This series just keeps getting better.

One word. Magnificent.

As much I like the stories, the whole Aron, Isabel and Troy story-line threw me off of this story. One moment Isabel was crazy about Aron, even telling the media they in a relationship. Then out of nowhere Isabel is in a relationship with Troy. Which didn't make any sense. Again it throw the whole story off for me. It made it kind of hard to read.

A great fun story hope to see more to this.

The Troy Aron Isabella thing is the same as Soul did with Creamy. Sudden love triangle with the main character getting pushed out of it, from nowhere. At least in here it had some foundation, in Creamy there wasn't at all.

To the anon if you couldn't get that was a joke she played on Aron, can't help you. And there was never a love triangle between Aron, Troy, and Isabel. It's always been her and Troy. She just wants a child, hence why Aron was called in. Also why Aron left when Troy stepped up to the plate. He was never a contender in a romantic sense. It was always her and Troy in that regards.

I like the way Aaron put Issabel and Vera in their places. Nice series.

as always great writing. Enjoyed the read looking forward to more.

Within Temptation's 'Entertain You' is a great song. Cool reference.

Ouuuu, we all do need another part to the series!!

Finally got around to reading it, and was not disappointed. At the time of this comment, Legacy is out, and another one is coming if it hasn't appeared already. I am enjoying this series. I enjoyed the inclusion of Within Temptaion's 'Entertain You' as well.

Great story! I hope that you put part4 out soon

Ideally when Troy behaved like a complete jerk and smart mouthed him saying his services weren't needed, Aron should have lifted him by his neck and told him if he ever spoke to him like that again, he would be finding himself somewhere else to live, then turned to Izzy and told her the same for using him. He let them off to easily considering all he does for of them, especially Izzy, that whole section disgusted me. Notice no confirmation she's pregnant maybe that would be the sweetest justice, Troy is infertile!

Waiting for Chapter 4.

Soul, in response to your comment to anonymous, it DOES seem like you were making it clear that Isabel’s main interest was Aron. That was absolutely my take until out of nowhere she and Troy were a more serious couple. I’m not complaining at all that’s just how it comes across. I will agree that if I were Aron I would be more than pissed if I’d spent all that time on her outfit just to be knocked aside like that. Doesn’t change my enjoyment of the story

Some of the family dynamics are getting a little boring, but still in love with the overall storyline! 5*

Great story. One more of your stories I'd like to read more of.

Loved all of this story although it was very long!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue with more chapters!!!!!!! 5 stars!!!!!!!

Just like other I also don't like the sequences where Aron took time to made suit for Isabel but when it was time Troy butted in and dismissed him rudely and also Isabel using him to make Troy jealous. Any rational person would feel betrayed and used. That scene disgusted me also.

Gotta say, this whole family is toxic. Sister used him for money and to trigger Troy, parents/sibs beat him before knowing if he had powers or not, mom raped him. On top of all that, knowing that Aron is completely against the whole orgy thing, at least partially understanding that Veil is very important to him (the only one that truely has his back, to use his own words), not only did Aminah change the android body without telling him, she actually modified Veil's personality to make her a whore ("more promiscuous"). The family were the way they were and everyone chose to act the way they did, but I was thinking Aron might finally have a partner just for himself and the most "reasonable" member of the family, his "wife" to boot, goes and fucks that up too.

Let's see how the next chapter goes.

Lyla and Jill can stay, Aron can hopefully recover an earlier, un-slutified version of Veil, everyone else gets the boot. Toodaloo!

@RuckinLguard,

𝐼 𝑘𝑛𝑜𝑤 𝑤ℎ𝑎𝑡 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑚𝑒𝑎𝑛.

WTF!!! There were four chapters, now there are only two. Did you remove the other two chapters?