by soul71
This was a great read. I liked this version of the story over the similar story told in The Boys. Can't wait to see what you have in store for the next story.
Please you must let us know what happens to Jill and if Aron saves her or not...
Wow way beyond what we were expecting but still a 5*. It's great that Aron still isn't the Hero but still kinda the hero. Love they turn out man. And yeah don't leave us hanging with the Kill thing that could be interesting indeed. Can't wait to see how this one plays out.
Thank you. I thought the first was a one-shot. Now i get a sequel. Can you please keep this up as long as possible. I love the characters & the story. It feels like how I got addicted to comics as a kid.
Darn you... Again you have created another spectacular story that has made my imagination go crazy. This is another story to be read multiple times. And a cliffhanger to boot. Well done.
Thank you.
Loved the first installment this was just as good looking forward to the third and hopefully much more of sky high. I can never get over how good your stories are to read.
I liked the first one alot. I love this one. The only thing I hate is having to wait for the next one...
I can't wait for the next Akeldama, either!
Good read and good continuation. My only real issues are too much smirking and a bit too much inner monologue.
Can't wait for more. Jill, trying to get both sisters pregnant, starting his business, the babies growing with their powers, a true love affair with Sara... We could go on. Grouch6977
LOVED IT! 25 STARS! SURE HOPE THERE IS AT LEAST ONE MORE CHAPTER TO THIS STORY. THANK YOU SOUL71, EXCELLENT STORY!
Thank you for getting this out so quickly, I know you have a lot of projects pulling you in different directions and I appreciate you prioritizing this story. It is one of my favorites and I'm very much looking forward to more of the Sky High story.
I know you said the end for now, bot please continue this story. Jill needs to be awakened and healed. This story is way to good to just end here.
Fun story with twists and turns and a cliffhanger at the end. Hoping for another chapter!
Excellent story, clearly you have more planned. Kudos! This storyline deserves a new category - sci-fi and incest undersell what you have in-progress. Looking forward to the next installment.
Know I'm left wanting more. I absolutely love your work. Keep it up please.
You do know that a woman can reverse having her tubes tied or arons swimmers could just go past also carol should become the ais new body
I actually think this second part may be better than the beginning :)
Please do not stop!!
Ace. Loved the way you took this forward and what a seesaw it's been. Surely at least another chapter as Aron has to bring Sara into the family and that cliffhanger of an end, Jill, and what about Veil.
5 stars
Well, THAT was a cliffhanger! What does he do? Does he save Jill? Does he give the body to Veil? Does Veil go crazy realizing the body Jill has was to be hers? Does Void make another body so both will have one? Just what does our intrepid reluctant hero do? Pardon me...Anti-hero...
As always, well done, and thank you for sharing this story!
Veil or Jill. Or, does he build two? Once Jill awakens and since Izzy has her grandmother's looks and powers, does Izzy, by default, becomes Jill's "mother"?? Being in animation for 60 years certainly will cause her muscles to degrade where they are nonusable. And what to do with Sara?? Marriage, maybe?? As usual, a great story continues. Grouch6977
Still a great read after yet another read through look forward to more sky high.
Great story! Love it so far. Can't wait for the next one and the discussion with the family as to why he kills. I'm hoping he blames them for the many years he felt unloved and rejected, when they never came to visit him (even though they did in secret). That should really put his family in place for what they did.
Would have loved some elaboration on the family orgy scene, at least a paragraph, not just a few sentences. Even in the first chapter there was not much detail about the family orgy night, considering the stories go over so many pages. Great series anyway.
So Aaron does not participate in the family orgies but stays in the room with them throughout the fuck-fests. For what, giving them moral support?! Lol!!! He is some weirdo. Dude, either get in or get out. I mean he prefers to keep it private one-on-one when he fucks his women, fine with that but why sit through the whole orgy when the rest of the family fucks each others' brains out. May be he wants to learn a thing or two about how to fuck during an orgy, so he might do it in the future if he changes his mind. Lol! At least, Aaron is not a willing cuck who just watches and does not get any action. He is man enough and gets to fuck all the women in the family individually and even opens up to threesome and even gets a woman outside of the family. All the women want to fuck him too. How about the women convince him to getting into a reverse gang-bang session, where all the ladies gang up on him taking turns fucking him. That would be fun.
Anyways, this is just me ranting, ;-). Please don't take it the wrong way, Mr. Author. This is a great series of stories and I am looking forward to next chapter.
Iβm getting to this series after they all were written so I read them as the sight suggested. Read the last one second now Iβm all screwed up. Still was good just hate doing that. Anyway you could put a little note at top of new story for idiots like me? I read first part then the sight had cosmic as next in series.
Great story - loved the whole series...
Just one small issue - like "2Reader" below comments I also ended up reading these out of sequence since "Cosmic" is linked as the second instalment whilst "Legacy" is show as a separate story. Could you please either sort out the misleading series links or put a comment at the start of each chapter showing the suggested reading order?
Many thanks for sharing your work with us all....
Take out the sex and you almost have Watchmen but ilike this one Sooooooo much better!!!
Clearly one of the most prolific and imaginative writers on the site. Simply outstanding story. Still can't believe this series slipped by me. 5* and on to the next one.
The family tree is to complicated to figure out. I thought he revived Jill in the previouschapter, with the heart of the star.
I don't know why people gets confuse on this, the story order can determine by date they are published. Some people are totally Confused.
Order:
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πππ¦ π»ππβ π΄ππ‘ππ π·πππ - πΏπππππ¦,
πππ¦ π»ππβ π΄ππ‘ππ π·πππ - πΆππ πππ,
πππ¦ π»ππβ π΄ππ‘ππ π·πππ - πππππ'π ππππ
πβπ ππππ¦ π‘βπππ πΌ ππππ'π‘ ππππ ππ π‘βππ‘ π π’πππππ‘πππ πβπππππ‘ππ πππ π‘ππ ππ’πβ ππππππ¦ πππ πππππ¦πππ, πΌ ππππ π‘βππ¦ πππ'π‘ π‘ππ’π π‘ βππ πππ πππ‘.
Amazing story, 5 β. Would have loved to read detailed sex scene between Sara and the family.
Also relationship between Chery, Carl and Neil is confusing for me. Are they siblings and married?