by JTCIII
Excellent! Your setting and characters fit flawlessly with the game -- I never forgot that I was in Skyrim, and I loved that. Your physical descriptions were wonderful, and I love that you didn't just use one name for each body part. And using Shouts to up their level of intercourse? Brilliant!!!! Now I just want a story from you where Lydia gets knocked up.
The whirlwind sprint was a delightful and intelligent idea. Perhaps the best I have ever seen in fan fiction, even in non-erotic ones
Great stuff...make it a series...n the whirlwind sprint...nice one
These are amazing stories, well written and great takes on a character from a great game. Keep them up, I look forward to your next one!
This is one of the best stories I've read so far, Keep them coming your simply Amazing!
Thanks for all the feedback, guys. Glad to know that there's some fans out there. I don't know if I'll pick things up with Lydia and her Thane again. I'm currently working on the third entry in my Jessica Rabbit series and my Marvel/DC crossover story. Hopefully there's some overlap in the ven diagrams of the fans of this story and those stories.
Really great overall, and I can't thank you enough for including a titfuck orgasm. I would love to see more stories from you, both about Lydia and your other characters. Keep it up!
it would be awesome to have Lydia get knocked up by her thane!!!!
it would be really nice to see Lydia get pregnant by the dragonborn!!!!
Thanks for all the feedback guys! Keep it up and I may end up writing a third chapter after all.
At the rate these two are going Lydia will end up pregnant.
For a third story, after defeating what's his name, the big bad black dragon, he is given a wish to grant in the great hall. He asks for his thane, and then maybe anal?
Thanks! While I don't have any plans for a third entry in the series I'm glad you've liked these two.