All Comments on 'Sláinte'

Awesome

There are not too many story’s on here that highlight the woman’s perspective and desire as well as you do...

Super hot, thank you for sharing

classy one indeed

Amazing. I love how you drag the reader right down to them so we can be voyeurs to their passion in more of a close-up than a bird's eye view. The words you chose to use were so powerful, you wanted them to experience their first climax together. -- Shawna

really loved this!

Wow. This is intensely excellent. I love the vivid sounds and sensations. My favorite line: "...painting his pleasure inside my body so deep I'll never be able to wash the memory from me." That is some damn fine poetry.