All Comments on 'Slave Girl Ch. 53-65'

I didn't think it was that wierd, I've been on Literotica a few years now and this was a pretty fun exploration of magical play and a deepening of Rosa's and Quin's relationship. Having those emotions gives the story wieght. Like that they are not perfect but so much fun to read. Also great escalation at the end. Excited for more.

plz continue

Wasn't too weird for me. I mean, yeah, a bit, but it was good weird. Honestly, if I had that magical bracelet, the chances of me using it in the exact same fashion are pretty damn high.

Well, as usual, a lot has happened in this section. As we all know, the author opened this section with the warning that things might get a little weird. OK, they did. But any weirder that certain other parts of this story? I don't think so. On the weirdness scale, I find the chapters Suckubus and Demon Tongue far weirder than anything in this section. I assume when the Author said things would get a little weird he was talking about the way the magic bracelet was used? Was that even weird? Maybe, but I have to throw in with another commenter and say that if I had such a bracelet, "the chances of me using it in the exact same fashion are pretty damn high." As I have said before in comments for previous sections of this story, the author is at his best when he is describing this world and the interactions of the people within it. I really enjoyed it where Quinn met the farmers and he had to struggle with their, what he thought of as charity, and how Rosa, with so few words, helped him. The chapters where they met Peisandros and Aemelia; I almost couldn't get through the part where they were all together and Quinn was failing so miserably at being a good boy for Rosa. I almost couldn't get through it, not because it was so poorly written, but because it was so well written. It was so vividly written that I was feeling Quinn's pain and embarrassment so deeply that I actually hurt for him. I don't know what better compliment I can give than that. I thought that with Quinn officially becoming Rosa's boy that there would be no further conflict between them. I am glad to see that the author was able to find something, because the scene on that mountain trail played out so vividly. I'm using that word a lot, aren't I? Now Rosa has been captured by a monster. Obviously Quinn is going to rescue her. I just can't wait to see how he does it. As usual, 5 stars

I feel a genuine saddness for quin.. yes rosa had it rough.. but in the same breath, i cant help but feel she has been grooming him, through the advantage of his inexperience.. he set her free, and she binds him in more ways than one.. but then again, she is living the only life she has ever known,.. this is a real sad story..

Loved this part, wasn't even very weird, if anything I feel like recommending people skip it for being weird isn't a good move because so much happened here, I wouldn't want to miss it, maybe an individual chapter warning but for the whole part? Not necessary. I'm not even sure which part you were talking about tbh, I found the part with the other couple to be the hardest to get through personally but it might have been the bracelet section, idk really. At any rate, still 5 stars