All Comments on 'Slavery Ch. 06'

I love this story! I'm so sad for their baby but glad the nasty doctor got what he deserved!

Please write more soon :)

I can't tell you how much I truly enjoy this story. Its so wonderful, sad, funny, exciting this story is soooo good.

First, I'd love it if at some point it could be explained how the galaxy (universe?) can be full of species which are biologically compatible with humans, when we're not even compatible with our closest relative here on earth (the chimpanzee).

Second thing: I can't remember who Zeve is.

3 things

1.you take yourself toooooooo seriously,this is a work of fiction.

2.first and foremost if all creatures in all the universe were created by God,then it is only logical that some creatures in different worlds will be similar enough to be genetically compatible.The same argument can be made for evolution as well

3.if you cant remember Zeve then go back and read about him!!!LOL!!

U r back and better than ever.What I like most about your story is how different and original it is.keep the chapters coming !!!!!!!!!

Can they trust the pills that he gave her?

She's got to keep adapting and keep surviving. At least Kalen cares for her.

Good riddance to Jaron and as the previous poster mentioned... don't trust the pills!

So happy to see an update this morning! Great chapter. I echo the comments about Jaron being gone. What a hateful person. Glad he's gone. Can't wait for the next chapter. Welcome back!

I am so glad I finally noticed the update, which I loved. I am excited and curious as to see what Kelan's home planet will fair out as...and even more, his wife. Please keep up the great work!

You are a really good writer and the story is great but it's too much drama and clues about the story line scatter all over the place. Normally I enjoy the drama and lil' mysteries but right now this is not for me, not now any way. So I'm out coz...

It's seem like this is heading toward Doctors gone mad on experiment with cross breeding and fetus/babies studying. Not to mention it's so much drama going on here ; they are going to war which is not being explain why yet (right?), her kidnapping haven't been fully explain, he is marry, and with all the info he got from her that the doctor can't be trust he still took her to Jaron insteed of going to a new doctor ; She want to "show" Jaron by drinking that tea allthough it smell bad and taste bad, hellooo "Luke use the force!" ? and how about the pills? I bet it's a fertility pills not birth controll pills, before she take it they should ask for a second opinion but then again how many doctors are in this mad experiment? Last but not least a so call doctor(?) attacted her and tried to open her up and he just killed him with out asked/ investigated who he is and why he want to cut her up? Knowing what he now know I hope he investigate that man and found the connection with Jaron and the answer why he seem so obsessss with getting K's slave pregant. If Jaron's goal was he/the govement want to develop super soldier...

I cant wait to see what happens I'm glad she can now communicate with kalen and I'm glad jeron is taking care of let us hope those pills are really birth control

Please, please keep writing! I love the story, the characters, the sex.... It's wonderful. Can't wait for the next installment!

I have read all your chapters, and I have to say that this story is, by far, my favorite story on here! Keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Absolutely love this story! Please don't stop!

Dear Alice ,

The story is fantastic. I am so addicted to it that the first thing I come home and do is check for updates. So I have a request pls write when we should expect the next chapter out on the top of the story so we don't end up checking ur profile everyday like addicts. Great pace not to fast not too slow. Love kalen I think every woman wants a man like that: fierce outside the bedroom, loving inside and hot in bed.

Take care :)

was seriously pissed that he is married. So I figure when they get back to his planet that she is going to have major problems with his wife to top everything else of! I for one don't think the baby would have killed her, being part human would have made it a more natural birth.IMO. I don't trust those pills.

I have no excuse for falling behind in your story. I could blame Lit for the way they have been posting but I honestly may have missed it who knows. Any way I saw chapter 8 posted today so I'm going to hopefully catchup today if not tomorrow. This is a really good story. Her a slave, he the only one of his kind on this planet and her master, now they go to fight and then go to his planet where oh yeah his wife is. It only gets more exciting w/each new chapter.

Well, that was certainly different.

But surprisingly enjoyable.....

I don't like that his married

Adore the sick sense of style that you use!! Brilliant story developement, with Clear hints of creative detail, straight foward, interesting start, this peice of work is one of the most throughoughtly entertaining and most believeable submissions on this website! Personally, i LOVE all the various Aspects to It! Satasfies my slightly different taste or erotica entirely! Such an intriguing plot! Can't wait to finish the rest of the chapters! Gotta go keep on Reading... Thanks you so much! You have a very sexy mind ;)

love, Maya

This story is good, I'm enjoying it. As other readers have mentioned, you are a very good writer. But one thing that has me scratching my head is her ability to communicate with Kalen in his native language so quickly. I cannot understand how after only 3 months of learning the language, she is able to understand and have complex conversations. I thought it the story developed more when they could barely communicate. The dialogue seems a bit less believable now. But those are my thoughts. You did a great job creating this tale.

I was so glad Jaron got to pay but it was ashame it was so quick imo. I'd like to have known why Kalen settled on this planet and what his rank is. Also why is how he treated his slave anybody else's business?

The proofreading def failed worse on this chapter.