All Comments on 'Sleep Walker'

another excellent story! keep it up!

I meant to score you a 5, for some reason though the F^%$ing program gave you a 3.

I wish that the end had been done a little differently...ie Rick comig home to a preggo wife solidly in love with her bro or similar

hell, can I fuck Dave too???

Oh WOW! GREAT story! And thanks for the climax; it was a really wet one! ;) I'll probably read this one over again.

Oh fuck you made me so wet reading this I was using my fingers and vibrator to bring me to a great orgasm. I wish I had Rick at home for a night and I would give him everything he wanted.

Julie

Since we are all at the end, I can say, what a set-up. You hooked us all. Great story!!

anonymous, I think you meant you wish you had DAVE. remember, rick is the worthless excuse of a husband. Dave is the brother fucking his sister, while she CALLS him rick because she's pretending to be sleepwalking.

You get a solid ten for knowing which of the guys was a good fuck and which was a dud! I was afraid I would have to respond to that anonymous comment and the implications of that were just.....bad! Again thanks for paying attention to my story. And to all of you who read it, THANKS!

dezurtdawg

I always pay attention to the details of stories I enjoy, and this was unquestionably one of them. In fact, while I know it's probably difficult to picture how you could extend this storyline, I still must say that a sequel would not be unwelcome.

-anubelore (aka umm anonymous [I was too lazy to sign in])

Best story I have read yet, well written and thanks for sharing

That was amazing.....one of the best stories I have read on here!! Thanks for the great read and hot, hot, hot story!!!

I read a lot of stories and this was without a doubt the best I have ever read.

I cum twice with my friend reading story. She got off also

Once I fucked my sister in sleep.

It need a little more

I guess that pretty much says it all. It also reminds me of happier times with my "ex" when she couldn't remember the next day.

Great story! Laughed the whole time! I think "purple invader" pretty much sums it up. Bahaha! Thanks DezurtDawg.

Your handle inspires great confidence in your writing ability.

Really, you could've done great things with this. *sad face*

Try again maybe? Less corny dialogue, less creativity in sexual naming, and more mature character development and description.

Thanks and good luck!

<3

ScarletDefiance

i caught my step sister using a dildo to this and she blew me so i wouldnt tell... so thx i guess

to the two anonymous if i had a hot sister it would of been a pleasure to please lol.

she should have been divorced before this. you need to write a new chapter with her getting divorced and moving in with bro permanetly.

This was simply an epic story. It certainly kept me entertained.

lol i have this disorder myself! i regularly have sex with my wife and never know. she just tells me the next day. love this story really hit home.

ROFLMFAO!! Thanks! And enjoy your 'problem'!

dezurtdawg

loved it, hot and sexy.

WELL THIS IS ONE GREAT STORY YOU DONE A GREAT JOB OF PUTTING IT ALL TOGETHER WELL DONE I LOVED IT I WOULD GIVE YOU A SKY FULL OF STARS

BUT AT LEAST YOU 5 PLUS STARSLOVED THE SEX PART AND JUST ABOUT EVERY PART FROM START TO FINSH GREAT JOB KEEP IT UP,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

,........................."R"....................................

Ok good one .....so does she leave rick?....do they live together and does she get prego

i loved the story. its what i did to my brother. hes the best lover a sister could want he dosent have an 8" cock he does have a nice thick 6" cock with even biger head thanks becky

It could use a sequel where the sister finds out she's pregnant by her brother.

I am still reeling after reading this story. I am in the market for a Dave-like creature. Or a Christian Grey like! My! My!!!!

Need more, he needs her ass, and needs to fuck her when Rick is home. Needs to give him the baby his ex took away from him.

That was pretty good defiantly need more

that was amazing please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was great need more. It made me cum..

great story

If I was a betting person, I'd bet her husband is going to be on the road a lot more and for longer periods if she has her way.

That was amazing!! the detail and how the sister planned the whole thing.

This story was so hot!!! I pray you have more written like this!!!!!!!!!

I bookmarked this before i was even halfway down The first page! I was not disappointed :-). Great story on an awesome theme, you did a good job!

My only suggestion is to never ever use the phrase "man batter" ever again :-)

Reality check. Sleep fucking? I don't think so. Do some research. Keep it real.

Nice story about the subject and well written I think.

Regarding the user commenting on reality check...I would tell him/her to go do the research him/herself.

Sleep fucking is real. Probably not as common as one would like, but it happens. 15-20 years ago I had a female friend who did just that, had sex in her sleep.

She called it sleeping with her eyes open and it always intrigued me a lot. I never came across anyone doing it since but thinking about it sure is a turn-on still.

Thinking about it, why would it surprise anyone? People sometimes drive cars etc while sleeping so why couldn't they fuck?

Too bad you apparently just 'skimmed' my tale instead of actually 'reading' it! Perhaps you could have put in the time to read the comment from "Anonymous" of 5-5-2013 who wrote, "That was amazing!! the detail and how the sister planned the whole thing." Did you notice where he/she wrote 'the sister PLANNED the whole thing.'? What that means (as did I) is that the sister was NEVER sleep walking but was using that as a way of getting to fuck her brother while making him THINK she had no control over what she was doing!

Good grief!

I liked the way she used her sleep walking to get what she desired from loving brother and he accepted it and still loved her even more

There really is such a thing as sleep sex it is know as sexsomnia. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sleep_sex

a story that COULD have been good ruined by the worthless DAWG. rushed no plot buildup no end and it has cheating all make it a waste of the sites space. add all the fake rave reviews ( writers should not post their own raves or get freinds, family and other writers to do it ) and it needs to be deleted.

Anonymous should go back to reading children's fairy tales.

The story is fiction and everyone knows it's fiction but it's also a fantasy that many men have, can identify with, would give their right arm for it to happen to them. It's also the typical fantasy of many men to have a bigger than normal cock and be able to fuck his female partner until she's worn out with orgasms.

So you think that makes a story bad? I think you're in the minority here. If you don't like this kind of story, then search Literotica for what you do like. I guarantee it's on this site, whatever you want.

For your information, I don't know the author, never heard of him till I came upon one of his stories. I've commented on most of them as anonymous rather than log in but for this one I'm going to log in.

I'll read every story this author will write and love every one of those stories. I think they're great, despite having a super human cock pounding a super human pussy. And yes there are a few grammatical errors but so what? None of these authors are professional, if they were they'd be writing for a living. (Actually some of them should be doing that now instead of giving it away.)

So shove your criticism where the sun doesn't shine or write the story yourself if you think you know better.

God I wish i was your sister..

I'm not sure which is funnier or more sad, the losers that totally slam a story for no apparent reason other than they have serious mental problems, or the losers that like to play as the comment area police, going off on other posters under the false assumption that this is a message board, not a comment area for the author, rofl. ...the funniest bit is that for all their policing, its pointless since the posters never come back after they post, so it never gets read, lol.

gr8 m8 no d-b8 i r8 it an 8 i h8 2 b in an ir8 st8 but its my f8

Fuck! That was a good story! Made me cum 4 times! I'm still a virgin but I wouldn't mind a guy pounding into me like that!!! 😉😍

1 thing that would have improved your story would be if you had told about the dream he was having before his sister climbed on top... all in all I gave you 5 stars though. Nice story! :)

My god, this was good, I gave u five stars!

I hardly do, this was great

Pleàse, write about any other relationships with ur sister!

I would love to hear more!

Perfect score of five - this story caught the mood of sibling sex, pleasure between brother and sister and even more, an exquisite ending.

Whi wud do that too there sister yio freek

The only problem I have, and it's PURELY for scenario setting, is that it is a myth to not wake someone up who's sleep walking. That's actually what you're SUPPOSED to do.

I love sleepwalking stories and this was the best I've read yet!

First. No a sleepwalker won't die if you wake them. That was said for safety we waking one can be dangerous. Sleepwalkers especially men have been known to be violent and waking any sleepwalker the wrong way can cause accidents or violence. The best thing is to direct the embassy to her without waking them. If not touch as little as possible And get them There. If you have to wake them do it from a distance and make a loud noise. Focus on ththe story and not incorrect medical advice. I love this story can't wait for more

So, she just ends up riding your dick until you come and goes to her own bed, falls asleep and the next day nothing that indicate she knew what happened?

If you come her pussy is full of sperm, so if she indeed sleep-fucking, she would have noticed the sperm in her pussy. So she would be upset because your fucked her in her sleep.

And since she wasn't upset, she was faking it. Killed the story from the beginning for me.

Just googled it and it can not hurt them medically but it is dangerous as they might hurt them selves or the person waking them before you run your mouth do reshearch

My uncle was sleep walking when he stayed with us, and my dad woke him up and he had a fit. So obviously it's not fucking bill shit. He almost died. Assholes.

How many of you retards actually think a brother could sleep fuck his sister? That's such a loaf of bullshit and if a dude does do that he's a sick fuck.

dezurtdawg here!

Hi guys n gals, just a quick note to let all of you know a few things.

First of all, I AM NOT DEAD........YET!

Besides my writer's block, my ticker started acting up a few years back and after way too many trips to the doctor they figured it out and prescribed meds to help with it. (My arteries are clean, just a non-correctable low expulsion factor. IF you know what that means you have my sympathy.) So I bounced from good days to bad days and the doctor helped to exacerbate that problem with constant changes to my meds. Shit!

Finally had a pacemaker implanted and, that, along with different meds seems to have stabilized things for me. So I've been slowly working on my long dormant stories. Unfortunately, while all of this went on I have forgotten my password to get onto my author's page to upload new stories that I have ready. Every time I ask for the reset password code it turns out that it won't work and thus far the help people here have been NO HELP!

So anyway, wish me luck at getting that fixed. I will try to add this note to all of my stories, or at least the last part for those that are series. Take care, all of you, and don't forget to vote!

dezurtdawg

NOT the first time I've read it either. It is unfinished and needs another chapter or add an epilog.

As a person who doesn’t fantasize about fucking family, i can most definitely say this was a great read and i fully love imagining the story as i read it and picturing as if i was there feeling all the same emotions and without a doubt enjoyed the cum load i blown while reading. Felt the ending could be expanded upon but in other words thanks for the story.

(Anonymous666) Oct.15, 2019

I wish I had got to fuck and eat out any or all of my sisters. I loved the story.2

First, to the few folks that commented along the lines of "who would do that to their sister, you freak! That is so wrong/sick/etc"

First, what's up with your hippocritical ass, fucker? You're the one reading incest stories in the incest section!!

Second, lots of brothers would do that to their sister's. Lots of sisters would do that to their brothers! Hell, millions fuck each other every day. Not to mention mothers and sons, father's and daughters, then there's the cousins. Lots and lots of those! And just think, all the ones that talk about it and write about it and even post pictures on the web, that's probably 1% of everyone doing g it, the rest just aren't bold enough to talk about it and just do it quietly!

...if I had sisters and they were interested, then hell yes! I have lots of hot cousins, and had a few interesting times with a few of them, just never enough time to get very far. Damnit!! :)

Really enjoyed your story of brother-sister love. It doesn't look like you wrote a sequel, but I can't help wondering what the two of them will do when Angie discovers she in knocked up before her husband comes back from his trip. Thanx for the Read!

There were some obvious character flaws and flubs,like Sister totally decieving her brother Dave,by calling him her husbands name Rick,also not completely unjustified but her cheating on her husband was a little mean,again I think Sister should just divorce her husband and be with her brother.

Also I think if she's on it she should get off of birth control and start having her brothers babies so they can raise them to be incestuous like them,oh and I think Sister should either sell or scrap her house after the water pipes burst and just live with her brother permanantly.Lastly I am angry Sister pretended to be asleep while fucking her brother,she should have just confessed from the get-go and let him decide,but instead she just screamed out Rick and pissing her brother off constantly,sisters shouldn't treat family like that.

I was wondering if anyone else had encountered a pussy that would clamp down on you like a vise, now I know! I had that experience with two different women. We’d be stroking along and her pussy would begin to be difficult to push back in to. Then, it would literally snap around my cock to the point it would either push me partially out of her, or if I was in real good it would HURT where is was tightened around my cock. Unlike your Dave, I am NOT some hung monster, basically pretty average in size. I was never able to hang in there long enough to see what happened. Usually the pain would cause me to pull out. I always wondered if that was the start o f a female shooting ?

Hell, Dave wasn’t the only one that thought she was asleep! That was very convincing story telling! She sort of gave it away, when she was getting so touchy feely with him during the day, zbut she had been away from her mate a while and could need attention. Anyway, that waas some excellent story writing.

Good, hot story. I love the fantasy. Keep writing this great stuff.

FANTASTIC

How sisters are suppose to treat the brothers an vice versa

I don't understand commentary from RodimusMike. if he wants you to change the whole premise of the story then he should write his own.

I liked the story. Keep it up. (No pun intended).

My sister left me gasping when I learned she had deceived me during sex. She led me to believe she was fucking her husband when in fact she knew she was fucking me. And what a pussy she had! It sucked my cum out of me like a vacuum cleaner and she didn’t stop until I was empty.

I. An even overlook the cuckholding of her husband because she was so hot.

Loved this one with a 5 stars!

Bill S.

This story should have Non Consensual tag

nice, damn hot action

Virtually zero explanation given as to why his ex would have an affair given what she had at her disposal. Unless she was just some cock-hungry skank in real need of trying a black dick and getting pregnant by one. OK it says later he heard she married him, but what, did she fall for him or did he get her addicted to drugs or something? So many questions, so few answers. Just seems like super lazy writing, but that's hardly a surprise. Being betrayed by getting cheated on is terribly cruel as it stands, but then finding out when she gives birth to another man's child, knowing she led you along all that time and making you think you were the father. It's like you lose a child in the process, too. Probably one of the worst things you could ever do to someone you supposedly care about.

A 27-year-old woman that thinks cum is drool. You really love to push the limits of how far we can suspend our disbelief don't you? Or maybe you just don't care as long as it sounds remotely plausible if the people involved were 2 cents short of a dollar. Fine, I'll overlook it. But I wish you would come up with more plausible situations.

The rest of the story was pretty decent and there is potential here for a nice romance. Rick needs to go. I would bet money he's cheating, because aren't they always in these scenarios? That's what everything I've observed and learned over the years tells me. Very few guys have the loyalty and conviction to remain true to the one they claim to love when tempting sexual opportunities present themselves. They're just weak and cave in to their more base desires. Pretty pathetic really. I don't blame the sister for shacking up with the bro given this situation, though the way she did wasn't exactly honest, she probably thought it was the only option she had that had a chance of success.

LOVED IT and had to backtrack and read some parts over and over. I know what it's like being married to a NYMPHO wife, for 18 years and miss it a lot and could write many stories about our

lives and the SEX we enjoyed, but tried to get some stories on here but couldn't make the right connections I guess. We both were masturbaters from day one and that contributed to a super sex life for us. Keep up the good stories, you got a horny reader here.

Her boobs are too small at least give her a avreage c his dick is a big 8 inch you could have matched that with f cups.

Crazy their parents didn't walk in on the end and join them like every one of your stories. Thank God they didnt you epic story ruiner.