All Comments on 'Sleeping Beast Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

this seems like it may be a pretty good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good for a first timer

This is Good. Keep posting regularly. Loved the start. 5 Stars. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Can't wait to read more!!!

biercebierceover 7 years ago
Intriguing beginning

The characters interaction create a great hook for the next chapter. Please share more.

Thanks

DeathAndTaxesDeathAndTaxesover 7 years ago
Yes please!

I like that you're going with some geography and nationalities that usually go overlooked in the world of erotica. I know damn well you did way too much research for this. :P Bonus points for using "sennight" in a sentence. Huzzah!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I'm only sad...

That this is a work in progress and we won't know when the updates are coming. So excited for where this is going!

TJSkywindTJSkywindover 7 years ago
Color me intrigued

Only one bugaboo ("from from"), but not enough to break the flow overmuch. Looking forward to how this develops.

Thanks for sharing! 5*

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 7 years ago
Wish I found the story later, so

I didn't have to wait so long for the next chapter. Looking forward to more!

AvidReader47AvidReader47about 7 years ago
DAMMIT

Well, I am hooked now. HOWEVER, I think that I'll read another story until this one gets farther along. But I will keep reading until the end.

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