by SteffiOlsen
This is Good. Keep posting regularly. Loved the start. 5 Stars. :)
The characters interaction create a great hook for the next chapter. Please share more.
Thanks
I like that you're going with some geography and nationalities that usually go overlooked in the world of erotica. I know damn well you did way too much research for this. :P Bonus points for using "sennight" in a sentence. Huzzah!
That this is a work in progress and we won't know when the updates are coming. So excited for where this is going!
Only one bugaboo ("from from"), but not enough to break the flow overmuch. Looking forward to how this develops.
Thanks for sharing! 5*
I didn't have to wait so long for the next chapter. Looking forward to more!
Well, I am hooked now. HOWEVER, I think that I'll read another story until this one gets farther along. But I will keep reading until the end.