All Comments on 'Sleeping Beast Ch. 07'

I love this story so much. I wish I could hug and kiss it.

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I'll be keeping a close eye out for this story from now on! You really have a way with words. I hope you update soon. :)

I feel like I don't comment enough on this story. I've been eating ever chapter up like candy. I love Nivid's persuasion to get her to touch herself, just the right tone - so often scenes like that come off corny or unrealistic, this one was great. I can't wait to see how everything comes to a head in this household.

I really love this story, and your writing style. Can't wait to read more!

so though it's well written, I can't completely enjoy it...

..... who is your most appealing creation yet in what is promising to be your most complex story. Nivid has also won me to his cause. Looking forward to your weaving together the many pieces: the resolution of the brothers situation; the curse; and the role of the wolves, particularly the white one which think is coming to importance. But, Steffi, take care of your family for now as you must. Your readers will await you.

I really enjoyed the premise and story line, but I feel the last couple chapters have had excessive gratuitous sex scenes and could have been condensed into a single chapter. I found myself skimming and skipping erotic scenes in the hopes of getting on with the plot, and I'm sorry to say the plot itself has for some time felt very slow in coming.

What a great story. I think we may have a triumvirate beginning? Hmm, will they share her love? Will Argas find another body, or live by the power of love? What a winding plot you weave! Keep going!

Love it!! Can't wait for more!!

Thank you! I am in awe of your creativity and your kindness toward your characters. I hope you enjoy their world as do your readers