All Comments on 'Sleeping Tricks'

WOW!!! What a Hot sexy story 5 Stars

I think I'll try this with my Girlfriend Pat I know she will love it I'll let her read this story.

Thanks bud. Enjoy your little naughty wife

Very nice story, at least they were mature enough to treat it as just an adventure and not destroy their marriage. There’s a big difference between love and sex.

Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)

Nice idea, but somehow it seemed to lose its way before petering out.

4 Stars. Interesting story, a little farfetched though.

my wife always wakes up. I could never trick her like that, but would like to try

I agree with one of the comments. It seemed to be going somewhere when Jake found out about Jason... and then he just disappeared? What happened there? We could have gotten so much more story. Also, I doubt she'd just cut off Jason once Roger decided the thrill for him was gone. Where's the story there? Does she cut him out? Will she admit to cheating on Roger? As a short story to read, this was pretty fun. 4/5 stars. As far as a writing project? This was a good proof-of-concept, but is missing a lot of meat. Both the journey and the destination fell a bit flat from its high starting point. 2.5/5 stars. Still a good read and does spark the imagination, so I'll round up to give it a 4/5.

Oh Boo! Mutual deceit and trickery. Where’s the fun in that?

Not as steamy as what I read before - the story lie was good but I believe too much repetition and not enough steamy description let it down. Pity.