by Asperger27
Part 3 please! Would love to see this go the way 'Conflicted' by cuckoldson went.
Attention readers.
After a hiatus of 2 months writing Ch.03. It's finally done and will be readable soon. I'm now working on Ch.04.
Again sorry for tbe delay. Going through some personal stuff.
Thanks
You really need to get an editor as your grammar errors seriously detra t from your stories. My biggest objection is your verb tenses are not consistent, even in the same sentence. Choose one tense, either present (as in 'he is') or past (as in 'he was').
I don’t think Ben is a virgin. Too much interpersonal relationships shown by him asan understanding her moods.