All Comments on 'Sleepless on the Sofa Ch. 05'

really enjoyed these chapters. I like how you've kept it to only 3-4 characters involved, helped the story a lot.

a bit more of same. would like more emotion and maybe less escalation. also, please deprived is not the word! it is depraved, please! looking for more, but the emotion/love/caring in more interesting than just the next level of physical ... a good, kind-hearted story so far. hope it stays that way.

Very realistic and loving, great job!

This is awesome... This story of exploration has to be one of the best I have read. Please continue!!!!