All Comments on 'Sleepover at Shelly's'

Either the writer is English and is kissing-up to the American contingent, or is an American trying to sound oh-so English, either way it's not working; pick a side of the pond and stick to it, this story is reasonable verging on 'yeah, whatever', but the contrived 'transatlantic' idiom is confusing and has a false ring to it, like a dud coin. Also, what makes me think this is an American posing as an English person is that under Section 16 (21) (a) of the Sexual Offences Act 2003, involving a student, even if over the age of 18, in a sexual relationship with a tutor or other person in a postion of trust is a criminal offence carrying an automatic prison sentence, and as there's been an endless amount of coverage recently over here because of this same issue, the writer should have known this, so points away for not checking facts or even a nod towards realism.

Never read anything so badly written

guys come on this is a place for young peoples to try their hand at literotica. it doesn't matter if they have their own style or adopt someone else's style. if you think they are so terrible why dont you write one of your own and see how well people like it? instead of being so quick to judge someone else make sure you can do it as well.

given the category, it seemed imbalanced- so much sex with Shelley, so little with Annie, almost no incest per se. The flashbacks made it a bit choppy, but I still found it hot.

Don't take any notice - it's a good first effort and I hope to see more !

not sure this story belongs in this category. beyond that, i liked it.

on another note, pay no attention when a fantasy story is attacked with reference to reality.

I would like to see where this story goes from here. Don't let peoples opinion stop you from writing. Keep it up and let your voice be heard.

Hot story, loved all the descriptive sex scenes. Hopefully there's a sequel with some hardcore mother/daughter action.

Wow

Would happily read a sequel.