All Comments on 'Sleepwalking Ch. 04: Anything Goes'

Love this whole story. Its obvious Nikki is in love with Grant, she needs to tell him. I bet when she does that the sleepwalking stops, she joins her brother in bed, Grant tells her he's in love with her too, then they live happily ever after together. Just my thoughts. Can't wait to see what happens next

like the other person said tell the brother that she loves him and wants his baby...

I think that you need to wright a final chapter on this and not leav me hanging

he eather needs to take the new girl or stay with the sister and make a story out of that i just read 3 of the best ch. make a fourth please you are a great wrighter

I would grade this one 10 ch2 a 8 and ch one7 do not stop wrighting you have a gift

use it thank you

I've really enjoyed this series so far, but what happened to the parents? They just seemed to disappear somewhere along the way.

him getting a girlfriend proves he has no love for his sister and was just using her until someone better came along. ruins the story.

All of a sudden a girlfriend shows up. Ruined the story. Don't understand why you keep bringing other third party people into your stories.

Excellent story so far!!

Well considering that he was a butt novice, I think when I told him if whatever he wanted to do to me was on the dvd he could do to me, but if in doubt make sure to use lots of lube where appropriate!! ;). Would be just your luck he would try a dry run! (Pardon the pun:) heh.

I think I see a threesome on the horizon!

Turned me off because the woman never cums. Wa thus written by a man???

inevitable that another girl would come in the picture. bring it on...

another fabulous chapter