All Comments on 'Sleepwalking Sis Pt. 01'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 4 years ago
Pure love

Very special parents let them continue. Well written and erotic story that needs more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good story.

It started out with some confusing grammar but cleared up before too long. One thing that I have always wondered about, though, is why seemingly every young woman in incest stories written by English or Aussie writers is named Emma? Even in Harry Potter. Lol. I really don't expect a reply to this question, but it does drive me a tiny bit nuts.

Frankie1952Frankie1952over 4 years ago

Oh very nice indeed. To be shagging big sis and the parents are ok with it. Sexual heaven.

OriginsunknownOriginsunknownover 4 years agoAuthor
Names

I always try to name my characters on someone I don't know, I have only ever used Emma once, usually going with Clara (after the Dr Who character Clara Oswald) but like to change it up now and then.

kaidmankaidmanover 4 years ago
dynamite start

liking this story it says part 1 I hope you continue it and I know what you mean about names I tend to avoid stories that have characters named the same as people I know

horny2doithorny2doitover 4 years ago

Yes, well written and was spot on about how a horny young guy would act in such a situation for sure. Now that his hot sister wants to have sex play all the time, he should become very experienced !! I hope the story next goes to the level that sister and brother hone their skills so its hot and very satisfying with more intense comments etc. There are many paths it can take. Thank you !

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 4 years ago
Liked it!

Good story. Plot line plausibly explained and the sex was hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Good story

Well written thanks good idea for a story

lovedefactolovedefactoabout 3 years ago

Very good story but it begs at least one more chapter!

cursrahcursrahover 2 years ago

need more of this story please

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...