All Comments on 'Slide Away'

very odd storyline, but better than most action, could do with a little more elaboration in places, epecially in public on the train - my favorite bit.

A hurried ending perhaps?

so bad i couldn't even finish it you put it in the wrong area it belongs in the fantacy or sci-fi area not here remove it and put it where it belongs you will get a lot better ratingssomewhere else

Not quite sure what to make of this one yet! I expect there will be aditional chapters, with a back story explaining what happened/is happening? Some typos here and there. A bit abreviated but it looks like it might actually be something original and new for a change! Write on! :)