All Comments on 'Slip in the Shower Version 03'

Copy & paste. Changing names & sex does not make anything like a story which has been written twice already any better than the rubbish it was before. Give up this lot is total rubbish.

over and over and over and over and over again!!!!!! I gqave you a 5 for your effort

Enough already. What's next...grandma, grandpa....

Same story with just he participants changed. Enough is enough!

Story wasn't that great the first time around, yet the 3rd, 4th, 5th...

I got some bad press for these four stories (I submitted them all at the same time). Firstly, I obviously should have posted in 'nonconsent/reluctance' - the general theme would probably have resonated with the guys over there. Secondly, I wrote these as a sort of experiment, to try to see (through writing) how similar the experience of sex is for girls and guys. So sorry you didn't like them, but I'm afraid these four were more for me than they were for you! Thanks

Are people retarded? The title clearly states version 3, as in alternative. People shouldn't be so quick to be rude. Especially if they dont have there facts right.

Just get it over with and write a story where your entire family has a huge orgy.

Was ok. Abrupt ending. No mention of finishing emergency services call. So wasn’t really a point setting that up as a plot point.