by Lasalles
I really enjoyed these two chapters, and I already feel immersed in the world you are building. I don't know if you would ever write more, but I would be looking forward to it. Overall. fantastic start. (Disappointed the aren't more comments.)
Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment. I am writing more. The third installment is coming along slowly, but it is encouraging to know you are enjoying the story so far.