All Comments on 'Slow and Painful Ch. 06'

by raymondhadley123

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodlealmost 9 years ago
The repeated blows to his head would result in a concussion.

Throw in the various bruises and he runs the risk of requiring hospitalization and one look at him is going to result in cops being called. I understand suspending disbelief but this is too much.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
What an incredibly stupid story.

Badly conceived and poorly written. So unbelievable that it's laughable. He has had several opportunities to overpower one of the women. And once he has one, he's free. I guarantee you once he grabs one or two of their fingers and breaks them, he'll be free and they will be spending their lives in jail. Even for fiction this was just awful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Ugh

The only thing that REALLY blows is this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
It's laughable

No body can ever do this . Fred had ample opportunities to run away. Anyways even cops can show bcoz he had already indicated his professor

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